distant drama and mended wounds (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on March 6, 2015

Excellent work

hug
kathy

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on January 30, 2015

You shook the poetic rafters with this gem!
"pirouette upon a platform of dreams" is goofy good.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 30, 2015

Both sentence and salvation - most interesting.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2015

watching the performers, "pretend to bleed" is drama ... mending wounds? ... one can only hope ... Awesome poetry, Jude ...

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 29, 2015

Jude drama always seems to amass from the distance and approach some what in stealth. As to the performance and its pretension to bleed from mended wounds there is an aura of mystique. Fine work my friend, fine work.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 29, 2015

Jude it's so good when the wounds mend. I so much enjoy your work.

Reviewed by Lark Pogue

Reviewed on January 29, 2015

Oh, this was another great one. Unique at its finest. I wish I knew how to get it in front of more people.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on January 29, 2015

A beautiful and enigmatic concoction of mystery and feeling...
Diana...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

Love the "textile of time" part, sort of a space thing about ripping a hole in the fabric of time...could see each and every visual in my mind & loved this one and will wonders never cease, I understood it for the most part...take care, Bob...-e-

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

~Jude~
A mysterious slant of light leads this wonderful dream
in visions unfolding.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

Actually I preferred the last two lines, (sorry Sherry), they put abject realism into the poem. It needed that realism I'm thinking.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

Stocked up on grub & grog, sit back and watch the performance, the story, an expos�, planned idea that was Born This Way
Blockbuster! Pass the whiskey, pass the Band-Aids...from snow white to red to blue! Encore!

s

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

Such an engaging and evocative poem, Jude. I truly draws the reader (me) in. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

I can so relate to, and am so drawn into this poem. I will admit that for me, I like it better without the last two lines. Suddenly those just snapped me out of flow that I was caught up in. Lots of excellent visuals in this one, Jude.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

One hell of a play, Love the sentence, "A tear in the textile of time"
Most original and damn good.

George

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

Hey Jude
Are you reading my mind. You have tapped into my world. What a poem!
Much peace light and love
Amber