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redefining doubt
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
Saturday, January 31, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I feel like I’m standing
on the surface of the moon

looking ahead
and absorbing the cold warmth of our sun

marveling at the blue surface
on the orb we all were born

seems the older you get the more you wonder about leaving
to remember the origin of the journey ahead

when the scenes I’ve enjoyed and endured
become a blur in the motion of time and space

when the energy remaining in my thoughts
rearrange and redesign their perspective

because the dreams of mankind
do not resemble the goals of true man

sometimes I remember how vast life really is
and how deep love can be

and how I must never surrender to uncertainty
probing every possible direction

and never allow the inconsistencies of doubt
to tumble into the space I inhabit, at least not without a fight

       

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 Reviews of "redefining doubt"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
Adda Boy! :) Love this and can hear your reasoned tones tending your spirit upwards as you move from the introspective observation to the resultant action, concerted by:

sometimes I remember how vast life really is
and how deep love can be

It's funny how our resolution for a Brave New Future is often shaped by the values and experiences of our past. We are in awe of what beauty or terribleness has already befallen us but are assured that whatever the future contains, it will be even greater and worth fighting for. Enriching poetry, Amigo; worth penning and strengthening to receive. xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
Hey Jude
We all have doubt it's part of evolving. Each time a new part of our life changes doubt certainly plays a role. Life is uncertain at times relationships shift all the time. We all have to adjust as we go. We have to keep the faith and believe in love and peace something that our generation always wanted!
Keep the faith my friend
Much peace light and love
Amber

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
Man's true spirit must always fight and survive.
True man and mankind's aspirations are, indeed, a dicotomy.

Reviewed by Carol Ann Phelan
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
Beautiful! We are all linked to the moon in a mysterious and learned way.

With respect and admiration.

Carol Phelan Aebby

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
If u do go to the moon, I wanna go too...just swing down in ur space craft and pick me up on ur way...-e-

Reviewed on February 1, 2015
Priceless advice contained here, Jude! Thank you.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
~Jude~
The journey is possible for the deep love unsurrendering.
Great perspective..

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
As with doubt, ego can also interfere in our lives. I try to keep both at bay.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Lark Pogue
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
Beautiful. And I agree with Jerry--those last two lines were brilliantly inperspective

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
To exist without contending is in defiance of the true human spirit. A probing poem Jude. May peace and love be always with you. Jon Michael

Reviewed on February 1, 2015
A self-evaluation type of poetry. I like to wake up in the morning and rejoice with the Lord for gifting me another new day. I look into the mirror and congratulate myself for being who I am. I toss all self-doubts to the wind. I just move forward.

Sandie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
Fight On, my friend.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
Ahhh . . . The last two lines cemented the above lines for me, Jude.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 1, 2015
Amen to those thoughts. Great poetry that asks the reader, without a question, to take note.


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