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broken dreams
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
Tuesday, March 10, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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sometimes the craving is lost
the longing to share has had its cost

the windows of expression pour into the flood
their muse is dragged through its cursive mud

the zeal to feel has met it match
and ideas exposed refuse to hatch

inside heart’s jam-packed heavy issues
live a box of scented and dusty tissues

I read these words to a sea of faces
the ones afraid of outer places

it’s tough to find a way to redeem
a reason to inspire broken dreams
 

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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 30, 2015
YA GOTTA WAIT, JUDE. AND ONE THING IS FOR SURE...IT WILL COME BACK. IT WILL SEEK YOU 'CAUSE, AFTER ALL, NO WHERE DOES INSPIRATION FEEL SO 'AT HOME'...AS WHEN IT INHABITS THE PRESENCE OF A POET. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 15, 2015
For every dream broken, a new dream awaits.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 12, 2015
Beautifully expressed! Christine xo

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on March 12, 2015
Ah!!! So my "darkness" is rubbing off! Splendid in its concise nature and depressive feel "...tough to find a way to redeem / a reason to inspire broken dreams." The feeling of finally "giving up."

Especially love the line: "their muse is dragged through its cursive mud" - not "cursed," but... "cursive" - SO witty! we 'write about' our muse(s) via "cursive;" so, whether intended or not, that is an incredibly bold image!
[check and proofread that 5th line, starting with "zeal."] -- Jeff

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
Hey Jude
I hear you my muse hears you but Gosh I am so tired and brain dead these days. I need a good massage some wine and a good nights sleep. Then perhaps things could become interesting!
Love the rhyme and flow of this poem
Peace light and love
Amber

Reviewed on March 11, 2015
You have to smile at the idea of scented AND dusty tissues!

Reviewed on March 11, 2015
Perhaps it's the moon's phases that cause us to lose certain phrases or maybe it is just the sun with flares that keep us so undone.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
~Jude~
Tough yes, inspiration can come within when
least expected.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
One must face the dawn of all new ideas.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
Vicious merry-go-round is this thing called life and longing to relate, to mend those who need mending, even though they refuse your outstretched hands . . .

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
When the timing is right, that person will hear your voice within the music that is you, and words that you speak will not matter at all.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 11, 2015
This is heartbreakingly true and so well expressed. When the going gets tough, you'll try anything to get you through but sometimes it's just not enough. And can backfire badly. But anything's better than giving up completely in the knowledge that sometime, somewhere, something will give and you'll move beyond. Whether or not there's anyone in that 'sea of faces' that's in the same place at the same time or even up for giving it a go is, of course, another matter. We can only try. Keep on keeping on, Amigo; others ARE listening - or trying to. xx

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on March 10, 2015
Beautiful...I miss your words so much I have been hanging in and ignoring poetry for a couple of years...now I read you and I feel sad that I have been away but...dear jude...I may not be back soon due to many reasons but know this...I love your work!

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2015
heartfelt poetry, Jude ... very moving ...


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