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forlorn verses
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
Sunday, March 15, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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she is a wounded soul

the lights in her house are always dimmed
except for a sole candle
curling on her desk
into the wee hours of the night

slowly it will burn out
as the twilight looms
over the captivity of lost stars
and murky, lonely dreams

she sits and stares into the shaky flame
mesmerized by the depth of its glaring indifference

still from its faint glimmer of warmth
she finds the will to scribe a poem

it’s her rite of passage
into a world of unrealized tomorrows

it is her salvation as well as her escape
from the proviso of shape and being

yet tormented by demons
she is unable to see
she’s really surrounded by angels
refusing to let them to flex their wings

for in her heart she’s not the worth
the time or effort to forgive herself

she missed the chance
to protect what she loved

and now she lives in a memory
in the forlorn verses
she refuses to reveal

        

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 Reviews of "forlorn verses"
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 18, 2015
Hey Jude,
Yes I agree with Kate, this poem is very familiar to me as well.
I feel as though you are looking right into my soul.
Very inspired and potentially cosmic for me

Peace, light and love
Amber

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 16, 2015
... and she seems very familiar - twin, perhaps, of the subject of 'distant drama...' (there are phrases here that echo) and daughter of cat-woman in '... crafty heart' or granddaughter of the character in 'ghost garden'? I don't know why I sense such an allegorical family connection within your poems; perhaps it's your latin heritage or perhaps the familial emotions your characters portray on a universal stage. Your life sketches are always potent, Kartero. xx

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 16, 2015
~Jude~
She is a wounded soul..to forgive herself absolutely would
have given her the chance..hiding in forlorn verses
keeps her wounded in the moment of the flame.
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 15, 2015
We can't hide from ourselves and it is futile to try. Nicely composed poem that opens up the mysteries of self.

Reviewed on March 15, 2015
We all are surrounded by angels everyday, some are human angels; but sometimes we don't see them, or perhaps not wanting to admit that they are there.

Sandie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 15, 2015
A moving character study, Robert, with well-chosen imagery that, IMO, effectively lays bare the differing levels one can confront, or glean from, in any experience. Your first line sets the mood well. Enjoyed...

Reviewed on March 15, 2015
I feel like you've been reading my mail!!!! You touched my soul.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 15, 2015
Forgiving oneself is a difficult transition to achieve. Took me many, many years to achieve, I was well into old age before I climbed aboard that sinking ship and saved myself in the process. Also I have forgiven all who need forgiving, even my mother. I forgave her, but I will never forget. Good one Jude . . .


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