Hey Jude,
Yes I agree with Kate, this poem is very familiar to me as well.
I feel as though you are looking right into my soul.
Very inspired and potentially cosmic for me
... and she seems very familiar - twin, perhaps, of the subject of 'distant drama...' (there are phrases here that echo) and daughter of cat-woman in '... crafty heart' or granddaughter of the character in 'ghost garden'? I don't know why I sense such an allegorical family connection within your poems; perhaps it's your latin heritage or perhaps the familial emotions your characters portray on a universal stage. Your life sketches are always potent, Kartero. xx
~Jude~
She is a wounded soul..to forgive herself absolutely would
have given her the chance..hiding in forlorn verses
keeps her wounded in the moment of the flame.
Lady Mary Ann
A moving character study, Robert, with well-chosen imagery that, IMO, effectively lays bare the differing levels one can confront, or glean from, in any experience. Your first line sets the mood well. Enjoyed...
Forgiving oneself is a difficult transition to achieve. Took me many, many years to achieve, I was well into old age before I climbed aboard that sinking ship and saved myself in the process. Also I have forgiven all who need forgiving, even my mother. I forgave her, but I will never forget. Good one Jude . . .
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Yes I agree with Kate, this poem is very familiar to me as well.
I feel as though you are looking right into my soul.
Very inspired and potentially cosmic for me
Peace, light and love
Amber
She is a wounded soul..to forgive herself absolutely would
have given her the chance..hiding in forlorn verses
keeps her wounded in the moment of the flame.
Lady Mary Ann
Sandie
Love ya!
Jane