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abstraction on evergreen sojourn
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
Saturday, March 21, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I learn little from the wood carving
etched into this lifeless tree

it’s not for me
to dig too far into ambiguous revelations

could be cryptic could be or banal
or a marker of love’s frolicking pals

anyway, it’s probably another
one of nature’s pages hardened by age
corroding in the toxic dew of morning sunlight

the moss has grown much too dense
obscuring its meaning
wallowing in forgotten song

I’ll just keep probing on
through the evergreens further on ahead

and pass those replanted
and reflect upon the ones who bleed
thick and viscous fumes

it just seems more productive
to try to find a sprout
that has passed through this thick phase of earth
without recoil or prejudice

stretching newness into the air

then I’ll clear the dust from its appendages
and then shine it with my mind

ah indeed, free from thought once again
when all about remains true in form

 

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 Reviews of "abstraction on evergreen sojourn"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 8, 2015
Great exchange of energies, Kartero! It only takes a few steps out into the 'great outdoors' (Bronx Botanical, not Manhattan!) to free the mind and be completely renewed. Nice accompanying biog pic, too. xx

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 23, 2015
Some stop to smell the roses while poets stop to
caress the leaves with their minds. Hurray for the poets!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 23, 2015
Hey Jude
We all Strive to find something fresh within the staleness that exists in our lives. Hope you find that sprout real soon!
Peace light and love
Amber

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 22, 2015
As usual, I find that your verses provoke thought, make me think, invite me to wonder. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on March 22, 2015
Finding that sprout unblemished and not scared is a beautiful thing.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 22, 2015
Marvelous prose on Spring as I see new life breaking the once frozen sod.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 22, 2015
~Jude~
Ah, indeed nature,when all about remains true in form.
Beautiful thoughts.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on March 22, 2015
Wonderful poem on renewal.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Speaking or seeking of your life further and deeper into the "id" of the mind...I like it and for a change I get it, I think...? -e-

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Deep stuff, or maybe I am just shallow. The thing is, the "real" ones have to keep probing through the underbrush of life, the rest just quit. I know I have probed until I though I was losing my mind, but you know, one day I found that "sprout," and it helped me come together within myself. Good one, man.

Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
Enjoyed very much...nice to read you again..


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