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Come, now, make love to me
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Come, now, make love to me.


© 2008


Dan Johnson


 


Back-story:


On a recent train trip, I was returning to Portland, Oregon and happened to be in the lounge car when a young man asked if he could share the space.  Never being one to turn down a chance to converse with someone besides myself, I welcomed his arrival.


 


After we introduced ourselves to one another, he said, “I’m going to Seattle, how about you?”  I told Anon that is his name that I was going to Portland, then on to the Oregon Coast, where I live.


 


While we were travelling west, we could see the eastern edge of the foothills of Glacier National Park and Anon said…”Look at those mountains, they sit there like a beautiful woman seducing you to come make love to them.”


 


We continued talking about a number of things but my mind kept going back to his statement and the plea from the beautiful woman.


 


Come, now, make love to me.


 


Here I wait, waiting only for you,


Through springs floods,


Summers heat,


Autumn means out with the old,


 Winter has its mood.


While I wait patiently for you to embrace my being,


I have been here ten thousand years and ten thousand more,


However, my yearning is now, only for you.


Come, now, make love to me


My fields are fertile for the taking,


My streams run through the veins of my soul,


My supple grassy meadow,


Keeps calling for you, to slip into forever dreams while,


I keep calling, waiting, crying, and hoping


That one day you will come, now, and make love to me.


 


At about 10pm, the train stopped at Whitehorse, Montana and the air cold and crisp, snow covered the ground, and the train moved slowly west of Glacier and could be heard through it’s lonesome whistle, “I’ll be back” and a breeze meandered through the trees whispering from a distant place; come, now, make love to me. 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Come, now, make love to me"
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
...the nature of this passionate pen...now tracks the pages beauty...of one asking to be loved...through a picture window headed north.
visual moments...brilliant write...
John

Reviewed on February 2, 2008
Dan- this is such a beauty! YOur way of balancing a sexual allure with a nature is truly appreciative!
Thank you for sharing!
Be SAFE and Enjoy!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
P.S. This poem is a treasured gem I will savor!

Reviewed by Willie Maartens
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Brilliantly beautiful. Willie

Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Dan this is gorgeous...the blending of majestic nature and sensuality is flawless.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
This is BRILLIANT! The analogy is stunning to me... I've already read it three times by the way...))
Myrna

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Beautiful writing~`*

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Enjoyed this read..well done!!

Lov etinka

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Beautiful imagry here Dan.
I couldn't help but think of the Mountain's Siren Song luring foolish, unsuspecting, and inexperienced hikers/climbers to their deaths in her timeless embrace of cold.
Excellent writing.

Walt

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Wow, I really like this, Dan. And having seen the glorious wonder and beauty of Glacier National Park many times, I hope 'I'll be back, too.'

But very sadly, like far too many of our glorious national parks today, some have big plans to rape and pillage Glacier, too.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
For a moment you got me there, i thought that the "come, make love to me" would come from thet dude Anon, don't blame me for the confusion, just read his name a couple of times and glue it to the poem title!!!
Then, you got me back there, near my beloved northen California, that glaciar air sometimes reaches down to let us know that is more of America out there.
Nice one friend, and you should forgive a deranged reader...or two.

Georg

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Well, I must admit that the title attracted me to this poem. The intro was useful and the piece itself was quite creative and evocative. I enjoyed the colorful description of the varied, unique seasons and the whispering breeze at the end.

This poem reminds me of a similar experience I had in Istanbul. Thank you for sharing this vivid experience.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Beautiful poem Dan! You described
everything so well. BRAVO!
Becca (Beckers)

Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Such a beautiful story/poem, Dan, well done. Lovely imagery and mood!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
what a fine write this is........such a conection built.....great job.... you caught that moment Dan,
stan


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