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The Student Teaches the Teacher
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With special thanks to Edith Schwartz for her contribution. dlj

The Student Teaches the Teacher


© 2008


Dan Johnson


 


For the last four weeks I have had the pleasure of teaching a creative writing course for our local parks and recreation district and despite the heavy rains and driving wind’s most of them have appeared each Wednesday night to talk about the craft of writing.


 


The first week we met I asked my students, not a one of them under age 50, to write about the night the lights went out in Seaside, and the following, in my estimation, is the cream of the crop.


 


This is how 80 plus year old, retired, schoolteacher, Edith Schwartz responded to the five plus days in early December that we were all without power.


 


I am happy to say that for a short time The Student became the Teacher with her excellent perspective on what it’s like to live through a blackout.


Dan Johnson


 


February 6, 2008                                                         BLACKOUT THOUGHTS


 


It was miserable, no communication, no heat or light, no hot water, and no coffee.


I dressed in my warmest clothes, wore them for days even to bed to keep warm. I also spent time looking out t he window huddled inside my coat, arms across my chest for warmth hating the dark and the cold.  I watched as blustery winds howled across the beach causing an explosion of sand so thick, visibility was only a few yards. Tales of Sarahan sand storms came to mind. Through the clouds of sand, I imagined shadows of camels trudging along heads bent low to avoid the fury of the storm.


            Both roads into Seaside were closed because of fallen trees. Even the largest spruce tree in the world had succumbed. When that tree fell, the boom must have been heard for miles.  Foresters have decided to let it lie in the woods and become a nurse log.


            Ham radio operators were trying to communicate with the outside world. The outside world---I loved that phrase.  It told of a miraculous utopia with restaurants, movies, stores full of clothes, furniture and even coffee.


            Rumors were flying through the air. The first bulletin announced men working on the electrical connections couldn’t find the break. Then we heard they had to quit working because the wind made the job too dangerous. They finally got electricity on across the river in Washington. They were working in Astoria. Oops, Gearhart was a terrible mess, it was going to take days. My neighbor triumphantly told me the traffic light at 12TH Avenue was on. They were coming our way and we would have electricity in a few hours. It didn’t happen.


            Disappointed, I glared at the grey skies, the gray ocean, and thought my grey thoughts. So it was an exhilarating moment when a man in a bright red sweater came to the door.


            “Nancy called,” he announced.


            I searched my memory for some one named Nancy.


            “Nancy in Albuquerque.”


            “Of course, my daughter Sarah’s friend.”


            “Your  daughter couldn’t get through on the telephone so Nancy called me. I


            don’t know her but she’s a real estate broker—so am I, that’s how she got my


            number. Sarah is worried about you.”


            “Tell Sarah and Nancy I’m fine, just waiting for the lights to come on again.”


            After I said that, I remembered the song written during World War II. When the Lights Come on Again, All over the World. Many people had endured, not days, but years of darkness and cold, plus the danger of being bombed. Now that I had had a small taste of misfortune, I resolved I would feel more compassion for people caught up in wars, natural disasters, people living for years in evacuation camps, people who watched their  children die of disease and starvation.   


Edith Schwartz        


 


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 Reviews of "The Student Teaches the Teacher"
Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Bravo Edith!
Dan, thanks for sharing this with us. Every day I learn something new and, many times, it's from my little granddaughter who is 23 months old :)!
Sandy
P.S. She doesn't like corndogs yet :)!

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
wow,such a striking write,thanks for sharing Dan,
stan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
A truly well penned perspective, and what a marvelous compassionate ending.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
A story told without dramatics being a dramatic one on its own.
Who said that caring humanity was cooling off?
Outstanding!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Surely a very enlightening moment to have a student enrich a teacher in recalling a specific event, well done...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
I love her!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Wow, what a wonderful write, very powerful and serves as a great reminder...age is only a state of mind! I would love to read more of her work!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
It takes only one student to make an entire evening of students worthwhile. I told you that you would have a great time with this writing venture, didn't I?

George
PS: Very rewarding, too. Wasn't it?

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
...how wonderfully human...a story is told...of complication...with simplicity and goodness of heart...the lights never really went out for Edith...but were always on in herself...to give and share with others.
brilliant...
John

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
I like your student! Isn't it wonderful to know that no matter how old we are or how young there is always a message, a lesson to be learned from life experinces? And I love her reason for publishing her book.. again I like Edith. Thank you for sharing this with us.. it made my day..)
Always,
Myrna

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
You can tell Edith for me that her story had me mesmerized. The sign of a superb writer! Thanks for sharing Dan, and congrats for the work you're doing!

Love,
ET

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Dan,

You took us there in vivid prose - powerfully penned - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
One further note:
I recently discovered that Edith has just publisshed her first book. This book contains poetry and prose that reflects a rich and exciting life. She has no plans to distrubute or sell her book in stores or online, instead she wanted to leave something for her friends and family.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Enjoyed very much sweetie,missed ya..have a wonderful day OK...Hugsssss


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