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Two Boys
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I wrote this short poem for our local writing group, the challenge being to write something about children. One boy I came across last Tuesday, the second on Wednesday-dlj

Two Boys
© 2009
Dan Johnson

Two boys travelled on the bus one day.
One, a Tuesday Boy,
The other, Wednesday’s lad,
Each carried burdens deeply hidden away.

Tuesday’s Boy spent his life in a chair,
With wheels that rolled him up and on the bus
And another set of wheels churned away inside his head.
He spoke with his crooked fingers going in mayhem’s direction
He touched his caregiver, first on her side,
then trying in vain to stroke her short blond hair,
she shied from his advances with a warning, behave, stay away.
could he tell, did he know, was he aware, did he really care?
Or did he crave the need to touch and be touched and held and loved?

Wednesday’s Boy jumped on the bus,
He greeted the driver with a handshake and hello.
Hong, a Vietnamese lad of maybe 19 or 23,
Sat next to me and first shook my hand then from nowhere,
He wrapped his arms around my neck and hugged me,
“Where you from?” he asked
“Chicago” is what I said.
“I’m from Miami, you go to Miami?”
“I’ve never been there, but would like to go.”
“Go…you have fun in Miami…where you go now?”
“Home” is all I said…“Me too” his sudden but quiet reply.
Then he went from friendly, outgoing, full of life… to sullen.
Hong got off the bus somewhere on Milwaukie… just past QFC.
As he prepared to leave I said “Good-bye Hong,” he nodded and pleadingly stared at me.

Two boys travelled on the bus one day.
One a Tuesday Boy,
The other, Wednesday’s lad,
Each carried burdens deeply hidden away.
 


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 19, 2009
A most compelling sharing via your verses, Dan. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Dan, this is exceptional. No, better, much better. Patrick

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on November 22, 2009
This is positively and absolutely one of your best EVER, EVER, EVER!! You could feel the yearning in Tuesday's boy to be more than the chair he must sit in.. Wednesday's lad.. he yearns for many things.. acceptance, possibly home... superb writing, my friend.. SUPERB!

Smiles for ya,
SPP


Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 22, 2009
Dan,
This scene is real and touching. We encounter many people everyday, and we have no way of knowing their troubles. Nicely penned. You engaged me.
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 21, 2009
wow Dan! -- your view into the psychological make-up of those two boys is surreal -- each of us no matter what our outward actions and appearances suggest have a unique story to be told -- many, filled with heart ache and despair -- it is a moving air that surrounds us with self doubts and inhibitions -- great write -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Very picturesque into the realm of human nature. Every travel the country on a Greyhound Bus? Absolutely fascinating and sometimes very sad as one by one the stories are revealed. Everyone should travel this way at least once to get a taste of humanity....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
This is beautiful, Dan, truly beautiful and the great soul of the author shines; compassion, keen observation, understatement and understanding...all are here in this moving work.
Kudos!

John

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Absolutely beautiful! AND, well written. Another good one by an excellent poet!

George

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
in depth observation Dan...kindness always matters

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Dan - Heartfelt words create moments of lives that touch another, with echos of ambiguous weights present but unknown. As the last stanza says:

Two boys traveled on the bus one day.
One a Tuesday Boy,
The other, Wednesday’s lad,
Each carried burdens deeply hidden away.

- David

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
A valued opus of the different lives of strangers in the eyes of a compassionate chronicler. There's a common thread in this telling of Two Boys - the need for human touch is so great of an emotion, Dan. You tell it so proud and it leaves me with the big picture of life. Where would we be without the invention of the wheel. Those stone wheels of the chariots in Neolithic transportation transport us to rubberized mobility...good stuff, Dan...of the kindness of strangers and a reminder to keep dialogue flowing...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
YEAH...THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL...TOUCHING AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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