Farewell - Haiku (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on March 15, 2011

Terrifying thought, Dan....and without warning thousands are lost...

Anna

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

A well written haiku.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

That is a place I do not want to be, Dan! Thanks for sharing.

Tony

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

The video images speak to your horror. If only the in and the out were so simple. Appreciated. Patrick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Wow! Dramatic flair made all the more chilling by your personal perspective.
Christine

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Truly chilling in so few words Dan.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

We are like ants in the face of Mother Nature's outbursts.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Great ku, Dan;
you made it personal
and that adds power and true feeling.

John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

powerful ku, D.L. impacts the senses!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Great Piece Dan
My Prayers go to all those faded
within the roars from hell
and thank God for the mercy of the survivors
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

i echo jerry's words...i'm sure japan was only the catalyst for your great words

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Says a lot in a very few syllables. Very well said.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

DAN ...

THIS SOUNDS LIKE THE EARTHQUAKE & TSUNAMI IN JAPAN! TOM.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

A most apt and timely haiku, Dan. This can be interpreted differently but I assume it was inspired by yesterday's tragic events in Japan. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Haiku is difficult to write but you've done a great job Dan. Others read it differently but to me you wrote about yesterday's horrendous tragedy in Japan.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Ditto It happens I have been there great writing sweet man...Hugsss

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Yep. Happens though. Innocent bystander gang-land drive by. Minding your own business, abducted, raped, murdered. Yep. Happens though.