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Silent Predator
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Silent Predator I knew a somewhat silent predator � He said he came for me � I let slip a jazzy tune written on a finger � He pointed to sorrow�s friend, a weary flame � One score plus a glitzy itsy-bitsy infinity! Sometimes, we lingered with only hope! He ties our hands tight behind our backs - His saxophone sermon is keen, like an open grave? I knew a somewhat arrogant foe � He follows everywhere I go � I led him to a steep cliff � Just one firm push? Sorry! I�m just trying to help � Like a diamond, I lingered in uncut stone � I let rip a meal cooked on a long finger � Luckily, his gluttony stifled a mouth full � Always outnumbered, - friends, never outclassed! I cursed a somewhat opinionated predator - He wishes he�d never came for me � Never seen idle behind his pulpit, Broken hopes become his two polished stones? � Yes, he mocks my sunshine and my recipe, With misdirection, cunning, and heartburn - But beware, my dearest naive friends, Soon, he�ll eat caviar with a fleshy appetizer - you! � a message from a man who believes in beauty � ---- as well as poetic justice �. The above text is copyright � ShyPoet1 ~ 2005, and may not be reproduced without permission.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Hey, nobody bother you! Nobody bother me either. ;-) Where have you been and where are you? Intriguing and chilling, Shy. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Outstanding Shy, this touches the core of my being, so powerful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 5, 2005

A meaningful and chilling message. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 3, 2005

Deep and powerful write as usual from you...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2005

Powerful write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

seems like someone has been a tad testy ...

well witten in both content and form ...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

miss you much....
full of great images
twisted....i agree with Judy
it's a new day baby.....
lol

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Great write....great lines 'his saxaphone sermon is keen'...What is the 'long finger' that wrote the song and cooked the meal?

EDL

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Fraid not in this case he had best not follow old Judy these days. I know this type of person though and lived through it. Now it is pay back time and he won't need crackers. Excellent thoughts here and powerful message that you bring out.