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Her Fight, Precious This Gift
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Her Fight, Precious This Gift 



Precious this valiant gift called Courage …
In the briar, fragrant leaves, and scarlet hips …
She nobly sprays pleasant scents and seasons,
Like roses that unfold fragile budding fists.
Much like an ugly puzzle with extra pieces,
She explores the air's wide stillness.
She sheds her tears of beauty, for humanity;
Perhaps, this thick patch has excessive thorns.

This tight, winding, rough road "less traveled"
Goes to where only good men dare to roam.
My friends, our Lady Courage, will not retreat,
Back to wing’d Heavens where Angels keep -
Her heart is yet entwined in our briar patch -
Here on this deeply troubled planet, Earth.
Her seedlings have fashioned many caste,
Into kind hearts that seldom tremble or crack.

Love is always rushing here, like everywhere,
Spilling honey o’er morn's precious dewdrops,
It is indisputably woven magnificent, for sure …
Love's flavor lingers on raspy pallets like chocolate,
But, 'tis quite bitter at battle's end if death.
It is this best part of men, that inspires great songs,
Sprinkle pollen down the throats of to all beings -
That thirst for bliss, and reap love’s rich harvests.

Bleeding burdens find valor in the wee hours
To heal that shattered part of us, that might die.
In times of drought, let fall, tender fall, raindrops;
Like vital blossoms, naked hearts shall catch teardrops.
Slung and spun are life's spectacles, let live vivid green.
If exiled be our Lady’s cohorts: love, honor, & wisdom,
Imprisoned are good people’s souls, on All Poet’s Day;
Biting are ants, lies men consume, and our lethal manner.

Flying on a sheik stallion, she's sleek in vital ways;
With poetic eyes, she hurls passion, clad in gusto.
Near a stream, on a burning hill, in merging dark,
She has built an arching rainbow-styled drawbridge,
To let loose God's abiding will on fresh poetic days.
A blossom charms, she warms, like a lady ought to;
She won’t wither from duties most mortals spurn;
Nor can she imagine, a rose without a lovely stem.

This pithy-edged gift, never sleeps, never weeps,
Nor can she be distracted as the garden seeps.
She’s a tear, a speck of light, a constant whisper,
That ushers lost hearts to an unseen, eternal horizon,
She never yields to vanity like unedited poems,
And makes boundless dreams, repeat liked hours,
As blood flows through our hearts, so shall wisdom.
She’s no bitch; her appeal falls from Heaven above!

Her blood is rich and fertile in the valley;
Insects and bugs are loud and loose in the bush …
Robust roots slurp while sappy stems are seeping …
Bright have been the briar’s pink petals of late …
Where the path is barbed, the willows weep …
Where mortality is pointed, lit is a poet’s sky;
Yes! Her sword is fallen unto an insipid shadow!
But, she says her fruit will ripen in the grove …

Clearly, a sodden end felt ever nearer,
Dear hope held firm and clearer,
Impressive, for a while,
Smelled sweetbrier’s swaying roses leaves…
The gate oft oiled, opens a way seldom evergreen,
Our shepherd keeps encouraging her flock …
Yes, Death comes to cheat her!
Thus the garden weeps …

The above text is copyright © ShyPoet1 ~ 2003,
and may not be reproduced without permission.

My thoughts for today:
1. To write well about death, you have to be preoccupied with life.

2. A life interrupted is sad.
A life wasted is unforgivable.
A life destroyed is un-Godly and un-American.
A life shadowed by indifference is our downfall.
A life lifted up by us is our miracle and our salvation!

3. If you can't help yourself, maybe you can help others.

4. Sometimes, flaws can be things of beauty.


NOTE: I’M RELOCATING TO A NEW CITY SOON SO PLEASE BE PATIENT!

GOD BLESS - SHYPOET

Sweet briar rose (R. rubiginosa, often sold as R. eglanteria) is named for its leaves. After a rain or when they're crushed, the leaves smell like green apples. The plant can grow to 12 feet tall, but hard pruning can turn it into a dense 4-foot hedge. Single pink flowers come only once each year, in late spring, and are followed by a galaxy of 1/2-inch hips that turn red-orange late in the season.

wild
rose of Europe ( Rosa eglanteria ), cultivated and now naturalized in the United States. The bush has fragrant foliage, and in the spring it has pink blossoms (usually single), which are followed by rose hips sometimes used in preserves.

For thousands of years roses have been valued not only for their scent and flowers, but for their fruit as well. The fruit of the rose is called a "hip". It is the swollen ovary of the flower which produces seed after the petals of a blossom whither and fall. Rose hips can be tiny, as are the berry sized fruit of Rosa multiflora. They can also be as large as a shooter marble, like those of the apothecary rose and the rugosa roses.

A thousand years before the birth of Christ, the Greeks in the time of Homer made a food of wild rose hips and called them "food of the Gods". The astringent shell of the hip, but not the seeds were made into teas and added to meat dishes. But it was not known until the twentieth century was it discovered that rose hips did indeed contain unique properties and the old Greek name took on a greater significance.

Note -
She never yields to vanity like unedited poems …

Nothing personal here, my poems are seldom review by my peers before posting. I know each one of us ediots edits our poems "ourselves" before posting!

 

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 Reviews of "Her Fight, Precious This Gift "
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
simple stunning!!!!
insightful, brillant
now this is what a poem should feel like!!!

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on February 6, 2004
Yes, death seems to overtake us all at inopportune moments. Interesting write. Where are you moving?

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 1, 2004
Splendid, Shy! Wonderful choice, too...love the hedge roses.

Gina

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Very nice.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 26, 2004
Brilliant write...this goes into my library....Fantastic!!!!!

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
Wow! I'm speechless...
I am familiar with Lady Wisdom, Lady Love, and yes, I do know courage - funny how I never recognized the lady. :o)) This is absolutely beautifully written and I savoured every single word. Standing ovation on this one, for sure...awesome.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Brilliant, outstanding work! Best wishes on your move...~Z~

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Jim, this is truly awesome!

"Flying on a sheik stallion, she's sleek in vital ways;
With poetic eyes, she hurls passion, clad in gusto.
Near a stream, on a burning hill, in merging dark,
She has built an arching rainbow-styled drawbridge,
To let loose God's abiding will on fresh poetic days.
A blossom charms, she warms, like a lady ought to;
She won’t wither from duties most mortals spurn;
Nor can she imagine, a rose without a lovely stem."

An absolutely glorious profound write!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Excellent, Shy! Imagery and perspective entwine in a harmonious expression. My little mental encyclopaedia pops out these gems: The rose is closely related to the apple. Rose hips are loaded with vitamin C. I've seen wild rose hips in Ontario the size of half-dollars.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Jim, you knocked me out with this one! Exceptional in every way!Bravo! Hope and pray your move goes well! Take care!

Reviewed on January 21, 2004
oh, this is truly magnificent, shy! enjoy your move; hope all goes well! will miss you while you are gone; but please DO hurry back!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
OUTSTANDING......You breathe verse.

Master Poet is a title you would wear well.......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Fantastic profound write! Enjoy your move, I'll be looking forward to your return. I am moving soon too! :-)

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Oh my, oh my...Shy Poet...I am indeed awestruck!
First by the metaphors and similies, then by the
comprehensive structure of thought that is sheer
beauty in motion before one's eyes. Your thoughts
for the day are as profound as your poetry, and
these (above) excel any you've written so far. So
much truth in them!
"To write about death, you have to be preoccupied
with life." Even the apostles writings paraphrase
such an observance as yours.
I, too, love the Rubirosa Roses. I have a hedge of
them in front of my picture window. They "make" the
seasons for me.
Keep us clothed in your poetic grandeur, master poet,
wherever you move to.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Wooooooooo!

I applaud you finatically!

Michael

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Jim....this is a masterpiece....you spend so much time composing
your poems like a fine musical piece from Mozart...This one sings.
There are so many messages in here. You always write from your
soul and that is what I like about reading YOU.....Courage....
what a powerful word that is....You certainly have shown it in
your life....And your expression of it shows a deep faith that
things can be better if we have the courage to go on and prove
our enemies wrong...I stand and applaud this one..

"She sheds her tears of beauty, for humanity;
Perhaps, this thick patch has excessive thorns."

The imagery in this piece is fantastic..another "winning" poem from you....Clap Clap....floria

Reviewed on January 21, 2004
The rose is always mesmerizing. Wonderful write, Shy!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
This is outstanding and so well written... BRAVO

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2004
This is wonderful, so full. I adore the 3rd stanza, especially the parrt about the chocolate, very sensual imagery. I also felt the detail in this was well done because it never grew tired. It reminded me of one of my favorite poets, Christina Rossetti, who, also wrote well about death- I agree with that statement. Excellent piece, from the photos to the bottom!! :)

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on January 20, 2004
The love within you share with all. May your trip be pleasant and inspring.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2004
BRILLIANT write, Shy!


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