The Ballad of Her and Me Sometimes (poem) by ShyPoet 1 on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 1, 2003

"Once I rode love-arching rainbows
After singing Her sweet name ...
Her fiddled rose fresh love ballads ...
Adieu! Wild untamed flame!" , what strong words.. took my breath away reading them

Reviewed by Danielle Ackley-McPhail (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2003

Wow! Very moving and graphic. These are my favorite lines : )

>I was aging Southern Whiskey.
>She drank bourbon and gin.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

They say oposites attract,seems they do but it is so much esier when two agree and love the same things...bliss then.
Your poem is as always passionate warm and full of magic,every line wonderful.
I loved it!

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

Oh my king you have a heart of a diamond,your words bring beauty to the heart. You are a master poet and your words calm the heart. Continue to write my king.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on July 19, 2003

This was really good, and I loved the ending!
"Once I rode love-arching rainbows
After singing Her sweet name ...
Her fiddled rose fresh love ballads ...
Adieu! Wild untamed flame!"
I have known "untamed flames" and they seem to leave a lasting impression. But would we have it any other way? I enjoyed this poem!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Excellent flow, excellent write.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 17, 2003

This haunts. Love (attraction) isn't enough.

Excellent.
Gina

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 16, 2003

This was so beautiful, I loved every word, excellently written!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

captivating indeed!!!!
love the rhythm round~n'~round

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Captivatingly sweet and such rich imagery! Wow, a very stunning piece!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Incredibly beautiful!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Ahhhhh what a TRUE PIECE OF BEAUTIFUL POETRY, can feel the emotion...the heart...the soul and I love it so much that into my library it does go!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Shy Poet ... a very enjoyable poem. Any hope left for you two? Bill Murray

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

luv the imagery in this poem...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

Lovely pic and poem!...but I wonder why at the places where you should be using the word "She", and you wrote "Her" instead.

...I'm just being curious...that's all.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Emilie Dybevik

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

Had to read it again. Have read this over and over...off to my library this one goes. One of the best pieces I have read in a long time on this subject. Always find good things on your link. This link never fails me :) Thanks-Em

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

The first verse drew me in, the second BLEW ME AWAY with it's perfection, the third verse-everyone has been there a time or two :), the fourth verse gives the third reason...the 5th verse tells us WHY she is the way she is....makes the reader love her too, the 6th brings us back to reality and life's unfairness (along with the 5th but is more profound here), 6th verse sums it up quite well. The "Her" references and the way the language was used here---oh, you are clever... I call this PERFECTION. You have outdone yourself YET again! Was a pleasure to read.

Thank you,
Emilie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

Absolutely full of soul and beauty. Lovely picture too, Shy. Bravo.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

That kind of relationship is with you forever Shy! A beautiful write, even though sad,hope is still alive;-)!