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I Have Been To Hell
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I Have Been To Hell


 


I have been to hell and back a few times.


Courageously I have walked into the fire


But more times than not I was thrown


Kicking and screaming all the way


I always emerged purged


…..And scarred


We each fight our own demons


Mine with walls


To allow a safe place to rest


So I may fight again


But my walls are crumbling


No longer protecting


The pain is great and I am weary


Many trying to find me to save me


Don’t ask me to open the door to hell


I fear the scorching, killing backdraft


I fear wolves in sheep’s clothing


I no longer trust, my perception’s warped


Through a fissure I see an outstretched hand


How do you know I won’t pull you in?


I will burn alone before I take you down


An army of one, I stand my ground


I have no footing, I see no way out


Salty sweat and smoke blinding me


Stumbling, crying out in the dark


Only to emerge at dawn


Purged, from nighttime’s hell


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 Reviews of "I Have Been To Hell"
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
The inner spirit can never be dimmed by a mind lost in a quagmire of thoughts that seem insane but are conquered by a will to not let it be so.

Reviewed on September 25, 2007
I've been there too, more than once, a powerful write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
This poem and pic is powerful enough to make me cringe, remembering the times I've been there and back. Too many to relate. When we stand alone it is either because we have to, for a time, or we choose to. I hope you are not doing so now, and my prayers are with you to find the solution , best suited to you. We are more powerful than we know, and our inner spirit is to overcome if we let it.


Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Raelynn we all have been to hell and back again though our actions sometime through life, it's ok for we do fine our way and a lot of times through the help of a friend or the helping hands of many. I believe thats what friends are their for. They are the Angels there to help us back to love and life. A wonderful write, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs coming your way, Rose

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
You emerge purged, but scarred. Powerful!
You have a big heart - not wanting to take anyone down into your "hell," but as your friend I'd take your place [if I could] just so you wouldn't have to go through hell. You know me, I'll give you space and time, but then I have to make sure that you're ok - cause I love you. You aren't ever alone anyway - you always have God.
I hope this poem took away some hell, and is bringing you baaack.
I love you,
Kathy

Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Powerfully chilling write; very well penned! BRAVA! Glad you have emerged! Not many people can say they've done that!

That pic....incredible!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
There are times we all must walk alone, stand alone and yes face the fires of hell alone but...there are times as well when a hand reached out by one or by many should be accepted as the hands of friendship. When we go through life we collect our scars, some physical and yes some emotional but without those scarrs just like without love...if we didn't have them we never truly lived, only existed. This is one "hellofa" write Rae if you'll excuse that last pun.
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Think the picture speaks volumes all by itself. Trust in God and your soul will be saved for eternity. One fantastic write....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on September 24, 2007
Wow, RaeLynn,

For having descended into the pits of Hell, you've emerged, stronger, better than before (albeit scarred). Who cares? The fact that you've survived life is a feat in itself! I saw great empowerment and courage in your painful words. Believe in you: I do. :) Well done.

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.


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