looking down
on some one I always looked up to
is hard
I am no longer that little boy
begging for you[r] admiration
attention
as much
we grow
up
apart
then back together again
our tangled vines reaching for the
sun
Yet, you are being pulled
downward, back
into this cold earth, as are the
shrinking snow piles, who’s
Icy……. slush we kick off our boots
I see the sadness in the snow banks of your
eyes….so so misty
the struggle to maintain
dignity
Though
Neither speaks the
word, aloud
we nod,.... understanding to the
other
this may be our last
time to tie up
loose ends of the burdens
we shared
we cared, we own
Dad,…….we will walk the trails …again
together, I promise
Snassano 03-14-08
Micke
Walt
Your Poetic Express Reaches Into The Depths Of Hearts Sorrows & Faith.
Embrasse'
Vickie
The wistfulness of all that wasn't said and was said is superb! How do you say so much by not saying certain things???
Cryssa
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
there arent really any [words] that pierce any more beautifully than these. ..so what to say that ahsnt already been spoken or breathed or felt?
the situation itself renders one silent, tenderly amazed at the grace in which you capture each fleeting moment; each small thing, a hand trembling, a shoulder drooping, a sigh of years. ..the delicate ache to hold on and somehow be able to elt go.. .
this is hauntingly spoken; such desperate reality in which a soul, a man, a BEing is cherished....
those words above i typed arent even comparable to what you give, to what you openly penned. ..
mon dieu
how rare you must be.
i'll jsut be quiet now and sit at your feet.
> <
Peace, always,
Dan
together, I promise
A truly heartfelt piece, my friend. I lost my Dad eight years ago now, and I still miss him immensely, and I, too, hope we'll be able to walk those trails again, together, some day.
Myrna
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(