I like how you introduce this style of poem (you have a few I see) with the one line commentaries. Again such original arranging of these simple verses gives it immediate impact--in this case a frightening reminder, too bad more readers outside the "choir" aren't listening. (maybe they are, as a lot don't leave comments)
keep this type coming, mike
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Well, this poem is excellently written...you give the devil his due and a sorry creature he is.
Be good, Jasmin Horst. I miss you.
Gina
keep this type coming, mike
Be safe,
Karen
Lenny