Depiction of your rhapsodic travelogue_truly extends our sensory perceptions ~.().~ Mélange of sequences of an underlining nature ~.().~ Advances my effectiveness of vivid impressions ~.().~
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Reviews of "Moldability of solidity"
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
the smile that one word brought: 'melange' [being a book nerd-- -immediate pavlovian "Dune" response. .. and the litany of fear 'fear is the mindkiller'. ..] EGADS. ..
made me want to spin circles in the universe's eyes, become my own galaxy, spiral shaped. ...t/ravel above and more than be.yond-
there is always a ring [an ancient monolithic sort] of clarity in your wOrds; your concepts so re\aching that they shake the obsidian out of my day and widen my eyes at all that IS... and the impressions that you leave behind are whispers, callings to be better, bolder, brighter, more and move heavens and earth to see the human.ness of what we are; who we are; when we are exploding brilliantly, like stars, like nebulaes, like distant points on the horizon of each other. .. .f^lling/shooting [g]race.fully- --
and solidness does not always validate for me; oft it is the opposite- --the invisible vaporal/winedrunk effect of that melange itself; to make one wiser. ...a truth experience of understanding other souls as y <our own.. .
this just rips open a path right through me. ..
cosmic seismo.words
leaves
me
shaking. ..
wondering. ..
luminously done
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made me want to spin circles in the universe's eyes, become my own galaxy, spiral shaped. ...t/ravel above and more than be.yond-
there is always a ring [an ancient monolithic sort] of clarity in your wOrds; your concepts so re\aching that they shake the obsidian out of my day and widen my eyes at all that IS... and the impressions that you leave behind are whispers, callings to be better, bolder, brighter, more and move heavens and earth to see the human.ness of what we are; who we are; when we are exploding brilliantly, like stars, like nebulaes, like distant points on the horizon of each other. .. .f^lling/shooting [g]race.fully- --
and solidness does not always validate for me; oft it is the opposite- --the invisible vaporal/winedrunk effect of that melange itself; to make one wiser. ...a truth experience of understanding other souls as y <our own.. .
this just rips open a path right through me. ..
cosmic seismo.words
leaves
me
shaking. ..
wondering. ..
luminously done
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Two of a kind!!
Love Tinka
Beautiful poetic words to match a beautiful picture.
Cryssa
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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Susan
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