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Cloud Burst
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Cloud Burst

 

The angels in heaven

cry and it poured tears

It was just

a cloud burst

 

I stood in the rain

with tears running

down my face

watching your image

fade away

in the mist

 

The heavens opened

and rain poured forth

The angels cried tears

of joy

 

I stood in the rain

crying tears of sorrow

watching you fade away

leaving me

 

I saw your beauty

in the sun

and a cloudy sky

appeared, I cried

washing away

our love

 

I stood in the rain

knowing I’d never see

your face again

You’d become a shadow

 

The angels in heaven

cry and it poured tears

It was just

a cloud burst

 

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 Reviews of "Cloud Burst"
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
Poignant write, Dale.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
Beautiful sentiments poetically expressed. Thank you for sharing. Happy Easter, Dale. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
Beatifully expressed Dale.....Happy Easter! Love, Dani

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
Another of your beautfully touching poems Dale. Always enjoy to read your work. Happy Easter. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
This is cleverly done Dale but oh so sad. (((HUGS)))

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
very nice
good job

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
I like the way you create a melancholic backdrop and write...EXCELLENT!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
so intense and beautiful Dale!!!
so tho........but so well expressed.........pax A

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
And now I am crying too Dale!!

God knows this poem moved me deeply!!

Straight from the heart!!

Love Tinky

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
sad, well written ...

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
Very sad Dale...nicely done..floria

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
Wow, Dale...this piece has some punch, the reiteration of rain and tears, clouds and leaving, the 'I stood in the rain's', all kinda suck the air out of the reader, leaving a feeling of bereftness. Great write! :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
Excellent poem, Dale.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
A sad tale, finely expressed...


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