This is a firey, cosmic write that blows me away! The structure and language set the pace and hold us spellbound for a short eternity, somewhat like your lover...
Very stark, very graphic, very "forever", like being tattooed on the palms of your hands or grafted into the skin of your heart. Hint of "Can't live with her; can't live without her!": the workings of the course of true love that never DID run smooth!! Again, just love your sparsity that packs more than a punch: you are master of the masses that is left unspoken. TY Kate xx
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
Beautiful, Dale
Thank You
Tracey
(This word list is familiar. lol)
i like the mood and direction this poem takes ...
I agree with Kate too;-)Great poem!
Love,
Eileen
Wow!!
Love Tinky