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Breathe in Fury
by Dale Clark → (All Poetry by Dale Clark)
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Breathe in Fury we breathe in fury frenzied and ferocious emotions screaming just to be heard above the din the wind is howling black clouds growling accumulating for the storm creating sorrow and joy the rain comes amidst thunder and lightening we cry in our dreams tears welling into puddles it flows from our hearts filled to the brim we find love in the sea waves crash to the shore our lives ebb and flow rivers of dreams oceans of sorrow loves resides in the deep we hear the dramatic beat pounding like a million drums helping love to flow back in crashing, rising in the white caps swell after swell we reach for lovers beach realizing sandy sleep where dreams come true we long for intimacy wishing not to be alone unable to live without love longing to be touched our bodies are a floating mist drifting in the nebulas gathering like the morning dew only to evaporate we gather with the clouds casting shadows upon the ground waiting for the rain to release our fears we long for another hoping to be real anxious for laughter to join with passion we breathe in a fury (c) D.E. Clark

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 1, 2008

Well done, my friend, this is passionate and ever flowing. I love your last stanza,
"we long for another

hoping to be real

anxious for laughter

to join with passion

we breathe in a fury"

So wonderfully written..

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 31, 2008

an intimate glimpse into the passionate world of your heqart ...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 30, 2008

Beautifully and passionately written.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

And you write some marvelous poems, my friend.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

I can feel the passion and intensity in your poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 29, 2008

a passionate write-intense

Reviewed by Axilea MU

The title (and first and last line of the poem) creates a mental image that is interesting and truthful. Your poem shows the hope, anxiety and contradiction of us humans trying to live with our passions and emotions.

Axilea

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Well done dale...liked the temperment of this write from beginning to end you felt the fury.

fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Exquisitely imaged, Dale, this one is stormy passion at its best. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Oh yesssss....indeed sweet man..how I love your words...sighhh...be well and always safe sweet Dale...Hugss,much love too you..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Dale, there is much passion in this tempestuous poem!
Beautifully written with the instruments of the storm!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Wonderful write with beautiful imagery.

Mary

Reviewed by stan nassano

aaaaw to find a beach to rest upon,,,
breathing the breath of life,nice write Dale,
stan

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Yep, we poets seem to chime and resonate for sure today, Dale. Perhaps we are just a load of hot air and thermals, banging and clanging together, cookin up a storm to let off a loada steam! But passion and laughter the real furore, for certain sure. I like this strident, loud and proud piece. Totally real! :)) xx

Reviewed by Bonnie May

A very emotion ride you have given us so glad you took us along. Lovely write Dale, Love, Bonnie