perhaps a person among people ?
just a thought ;) for you ladies?
...and gents...man or beast
Man among Men
to be a man among men
one must have the heart
to lend a hand
leave ones opinions behind
abandon false pride
become selfless
only then is a man a man
let me offer a plan
turn betrayal into favor
find light in the dark night
find a shining star
in its fiery flight
find the blue moon
turn blue to silver
twinkle in silence
blink in midnight
don't worry about stars
when time is infinite
look into the glorious light
become one with the night
then the sun will arise
to find you
the man you are
then you will find the heart
to lend a hand
then you will be
a man among men
Yes I was listening to a country song on the way home tonight and one of the lyrics goes well with this train of thought as expressed in your poem...it's not what you take when you leave this world it's what you leave behind
Fee
You have desribed a man among all men and women. Truly magnificant write Dale. WEll done, to know what a true man is, you must know you are one in your heart. And a great poet too. What a man! Love, Bonnie
The second book in the telepathy series. It contains more ways for the up and coming telepathist to experiment with the sending and receiving of thoughts and is at the end of the story about future telepathy people found unexpectedly chosen by the go
Edwin
not only for a man,but a woman too!Splendid poem!
Love,
Eileen
Fee