... this has some stirring moments! i would love to see it written in absolute free verse. there seems to be a multiplicity of rhymes and metaphors repeating themselves, and it could be streamlined into a very powerful work. still, and all, it is very nice.
Magic!!! Makes me think DISNEY! LOL...delightful for sure!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2003
Lovely, flowing poetry...
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2003
CJ,
soft romantic
beautiful imagery
Peg
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2003
CJ, love and life's adventure captured in the breeze. A poem that lets the readers imagination complete it for the final meaning. Very welll done. Bill
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
soft romantic
beautiful imagery
Peg