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The Clouds built...
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The clouds built a castle a dragon, a sail boat the storms collapsed and sank Lightning bolts singed a lock from fallen knight whose sword cut both ways and bled Rain leaked from the wound flowed into a cloudy ravine a heart, an arrow the archer bowed in bright red The sun disappeared taking the clouds away with it the threat of storms Thunder clapped instead The clouds built... � 2003 CJ Clark All Rights Reserved

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Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

Wooah creative! Rumbling write if those clouds were out right now they would turn shape to a smile ......terrific masterpiece !

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

splendid write Dale!!

When the air becomes heavy
With impending attack
And visual electricity
Fills the sky
Followed by the crash
Of displacement
One�
One - hundred and two�
One - hundred and three�
One - hundred and�
I count it out
Just to see
How close it was
I let droplets
Of rain fall onto me
And wonder
How it will feel
When the powerful
Lightning
Finally
Hits

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

a write that delights the senses!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Written with lots of imagery, great write.

Nancy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

very clever creative writing CJ,a pleasure to read!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

CJ this is excellant, love the imagery! Oh how I could just lay in the yard staring up at the clouds all day imagining such beautiful and wonderous things!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

CJ,
The imagery is magical in this one
Peggy

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Vivid, powerful write...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

This was beautiful! I loved the images here in this wonderful poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Beautiful, just splendid!!!

Peace,
Dove

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Love those clouds. Well done.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

OK ... This is brilliant! One of the most creative pieces I've seen.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Okay your pinching my brain...I love the feel in this. I really loved the 2nd stanza. Very vivid.

~DAM~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Very strong images, compelling and thought provoking.
Chrissie

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