The laughing mountains
shadow the piney woods
with platitudes of love
The hidden beasts
watch the children
running away
The eyes that watch
are curious ones
The fog envelopes wildness
in earthen silence
They watch the flowers
grow in meadows
fragrance flows
The air is clean and clear
to smile upon this dawn
A breeze whispers
to dew covered leaves
The laughing mountains
hide the sun
which continues it’s journey
to shine upon
The children’s games
while they run and play
The afternoon showers
sprinkle the woods lightly
The beasts sip the rain
The tears that fall
from the closing
of another day
As the tears dry
light fades away
into twilight
to guide the stars
The children sleep
as the moon arises
Lovers embrace
in the shimmering silver
light of the full moon
with platitudes of love
As night falls upon us
The beasts come out
to dance and play
The laughing mountains
shadow the lovers’ fervor
with consummate passion
Wonderful engrossing imagery, Dale! Love that image of laughing mountains. :)
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
What a contented picture you paint.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
Dale..your powers of observation are astute indeed..many miss what is right under their noses..the blade of grass the majestic mountain..the animal..thankyou for reminding us to take note of the wondrous world around us...the beauty of the blue planet and all that is on,in and above her...
Excellent write..
Dale your imagery has been so magical, enchanting in every way. Love the title, Laughing mountains, methinks you are very intimate with the ways of nature;-).
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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~Jackie~
Excellent write..
vesna
~Chrissie
Enjoyed this!!
Love Tinka
having lived in salt lake city, i evisioned them clearly in this exceptional, beauty of a write
thank you...SHEER EXCELLENCE...BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
o, to get away to my beloved wasatch...siiggghhhh