Pulse... (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

Dark and foreboding.

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

lots to think about here, Dale - thank you for sharing

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

The sliver of light
Becomes a flood
The blood is awash
This is your day
This moment, this motion
All the uncertainties
All the insecurities
The heart beats
Pulse...

Dale...fantastic write my friend....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Lovely poem Dale :0)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Wow, Dale, wonderful piece, sad, haunted, almost surreal, yet, it seems so real... Love it! :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

your poems are really improving in style, content and imagery....

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Outstanding work Dale!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Dale,
There is a very distinctive voice in your work,
it touches darker sides with
subtle and soft undertones! I like this!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

"The sliver of light
Becomes a flood
The blood is awash
This is your day
This moment, this motion
All the uncertainties
All the insecurities
The heart beats
Pulse..."

You've captured life in all of its clutter and vanity. Excellent.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

I love the way you put a poem together, it is always fine tuned! Wonderful work Dale!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

"Momentarily a second paused,
Between heart beats
Pulse..." <---you rip the hello out of senses don't you! Think mine stopped for a second when I read that. Your thoughts in prose is adored. Great job again Dale!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Great write Dale...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Wow, Dale, this is intensely deep!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Dale this is just very beautiful poetry....geee...it takes you places!!

Awesome imagery!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

says so much Dale, a real thinker, Al