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My Tears Will Be Your Chaser
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Charlie was, " THE MAN", he provided a Living Hell for his wife and child

I am a bartender, at The Jester, a bar that has been open for years,
I've watched drunks stagger in and out in quest for beers.
Charlie is a regular, he comes in every night,
His wife doesn't want him to drink, it leads to a constant fight.
Charlie always comes in bragging, that he puts her in her place,
His wife wears dark glasses to hide her beaten face.
Personally, I think that Charlie is slime, but his money spends,
My job is to serve drinks and let God worry about sins.
Rumor has it, that Charlie beats his son as well,
Charlie, the provider, he provides a living Hell.
Charlie has just wandered in, demanding a double,
Followed by his wife, so I brace for trouble.
She walks to the bar and sits at his side,
Her face is a bloody mess, a fact she didn't hide.
Charlie raises his glass to drink and she stops it in mid air,
His eyes send out a warning, her's say she doesn't care.
She said," Let My tears be the chaser for your booze",
" Tonight you took everything away, I have nothing more to lose!"
" I rushed Tommy to the hospital after the beating he got from you".
" Now Tommy is with God, he didn't pull through!"
Charlie orders a Bloody Mary and shrugs, to show he doesn't care,
He ignores the tragic woman, as though she wasn't there.
She reaches into her purse and pulls out a gun,
Points it at Charlie and then shows him a picture of their son.
" You tell Tommy that you love him and kiss his picture as well".
" If you don't do it Charlie, I swear I will blow you to Hell!"
Charlie's hands tremble, as he does what she asks,
I can't read her feelings, she keeps them masked.
She says," You ordered a Bloody Mary, I'll supply the blood!"
Then she placed the gun aganist her head, pulled the trigger, then fell with a thud.
Charlie sits in stunned silence, her blood taints his drink,
The horror that had unfolded before me,
changes my outlook and makes me think.
I step from behind the bar and walk out the door,
I will not be The Jester's bartender anymore!

MUSIC:Nothing Else Matters





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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
You've left me teary eyed with this. I saw it like a movie as I read.

Reviewed on September 7, 2008
This is so damn heart breaking! Too much of this is happening! People need to smarten up SC. and let things be, not be so selfish and thinking of ME, ME, ME!
This flowwwwwww was amazing and my tears won't stop falling!
P.s. Glad the bartender got a clue, a heart can only take so much! Glad I didn't miss this heart rendering piece~! MEN are selfish and WEAk to prey on woman, don't get me started!

WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Twisted Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2008
Your mind is dramatic and imaginative. Thoughts must run through your head like little storms.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
Boy, you sure have a way of hitting home and this one is a beauty. Too many times scenes such as this play out and I cannot help but wonder why the wife did not just take her children and leave, begin a new life. It may be rocky, rough, hard and leave one in dispair at times, but you are free and your children are safe. I know, I did.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
Gripped me with interest and the story unfolded with drama that would play out like a great movie scene...well done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
SC you brought tears to my eyes as I know for a fact this really happens in life far too often to far too many. there are so many cowards in this world who are so quick to beat a woman or a child yet would run from a man knowing what they would get. Thank you SC for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
Damn, that is was too sad...she does not deserve to die, nor did her son, and in point of fact nor does Charlie, he just deserves to die a slow death behind bars, while being beaten by every REAL man in prison...my fiance's ex, a cop, used to beat on her, and I would NEVER raise my hand towards her or anybody, including men, if I can help it...anyway I am a chicken, afraid I will get beaten back, but I would love to try to show Charlie just what an ass he has been...ed

Reviewed on September 4, 2008
This was a very tragic story. It's so sad and true and beaten women and children. You writing captured the essence of true terror and pain.

Mary

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
Damn, Comfort, you keep 'em coming and I'll keep reading 'em.
Did I mention the word, prolific? Teffific. -gene.


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