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Wind Charm 2
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Nick met Ann and fell in love! Will Ann's love be strong enough to save Nick from Devil Woman? Part 2 Part 3 will be posted tomorrow

Nick had finally found the woman of his dreams,
He prayed that Ann's love would save him from Devil Woman's evil schemes.
He felt safe and secure, with his head resting on Ann's rose scented breasts.
This, Angel Of Mercy, had blessed him with sweet rest.
Devil Woman, sensed Nick's peaceful state,
She also realized that another woman wanted her soul mate.
Devil Woman hissed," Bitch, you shall not have him, Nick is mine!"
"For now, you have his body, but I possess his mind!"
Devil Woman stood on the top of a hill, entreating the wind,
She chanted a spell, that would control Nick's body once again.
Ann smelled the scent of jasmine as it entered the room,
It was followed by a chill and the presence of doom.
Nick's body was ripped from Ann's embrace,
Then sharp fingernails savagely scratched her face.
Ann felt a pressure upon her body,paralyzing her on the bed,
She heard strange chanting, but couldn't understand what was said.
As she was held down, she saw Nick's body being devoured,
This assault went on hour after hour.
Nick moaned, a prisoner of unseen lust,
Ann lay helpless, unable to save him and betraying his trust.
Devil Woman screamed into the wind," Stupid Woman, you tried my hand",
" Now you will die, the price for being with my man!"

MUSIC: BAD BLOOD




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 Reviews of "Wind Charm 2"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
Ohh you make me think of the song "Devil woman". Another great write SC, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 2, 2008
I don't think ANYONE stands a chance with that devil woman!!!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Love it, SC. But like I said last time, you can't mess around with Devil Woman, unless of course one gets it on with that kind of thing.
-gene.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
A gripping opening to your story, SC. Very nicely done. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Entrancing from beginning to end, poor Nick, I don't think he stands a chance with that Devil woman. Great exciting write SC. Love this series. Love,Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
Hey Nick ! keep that Ann woman and let me take care of that wild Demon one, after I give her a ride, she ain't gonna ride a horse for a year!

Georg

Reviewed on October 1, 2008
What a story! So intense and the images are so vivid. Good work SC.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
the momentum builds and so does the desire for the happy ever after ending as the evil is for the present winning over the good.

Fee

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2008
This writing is fabulous! and a woman scorned! When part 3 is printed, I am going to read them as one long powerful story
CarolHawks


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