Dead Wrong (poem) by Southern Comfort on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 23, 2008

People need to look on the inside to see the real person. You got that soo right SC.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

I have often said that people should not judge others by their looks. Looks are deceiving and like you have written here and be your last judgement. Good work ;

hugs
kathy lynn

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

That's what happens to shallow hals! Scary SC and very well penned.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

Oh girl you weren't Dead Wrong...you were Dead Right! ! !
But dead anyway.

Georg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Oh wow. How sad. Hope you survived this horror.
Ron yore long time admirer.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

SC,

Terrifying: a lesson to not judge a book by its cover - well done. Glad it's fiction. I hope.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

SC,
"He looked like the dude that always beheaded the screaming chick!" What a great visual! and from then on the tone is firmly established, we think, until that quick twist, and the truth as it was is revelaed. Great lesson here but you have the talent not to drag down into preaching. A fine piece.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Frightening write. almost Alfred Hitchcock in scope and with a moral lesson as well. Sweet.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Never trust!
This is a writing of our times.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Great lesson, Comfort, which I hope you will never have to face.
-gene.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

That will teach you never again to judge a book by its cover, huh? Wow what an imagination you have. Did I ever tell you the story of a young girl who was raped in the back seat of my car, in my driveway no less??????????????

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

SC,

So much drama, I was with you all the way. The scariest part of this is it happens all the time. Another fantastic write.

Mary

Reviewed by Twisted Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

I like the point of view you chose to write this in. You always write something interesting.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

I suppose all of Ted Bundy's victems felt safe with him in the beginning as well.
Good 'un Sissy. There is a valuable lesson here, Shoulda stayed with Bubba.

Walt

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 20, 2008

Oh how many times we make this mistake not to that extent, but we do judge on looks. So Sad really, when the heart is what we should be looking at. Great wise write SC. Love ya, Bonnie