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Fighting For My Life
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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My enemy wishes victory, so I must battle on,
She is cunning, ardent and strong.
The battle is bloody and heated, with no time to breathe,
I pray that she will finally give up and just leave.
She thrusts at me, her sword slashing, making me bleed,
She screames," Just surrender, bow down to me, let me lead!"
I curse that she exists, she continues to cross the line,
We both want to dominate, no common ground do we find.
I fight to maintain, she fights for change,
If she wins, total chaos will reign.
If she becomes the victor, devastation will be left in her wake,
So I must battle on for sainty's sake.
Restless, unsatified, questing for freedom, she fights to get free,
But I must fight and hold this sad entity, deep inside of me.

MUSIC: Destiny


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 Reviews of "Fighting For My Life"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on November 2, 2008
Sometimes we have to battle that which would take over us.
hugs
Kathy Lynn

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2008
Your battle gives you strength
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 24, 2008
Boy SC this is so heartwrenching. Felt such pain and agony all through it. YOu'll win girl with your determination you will overcome. Great write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on October 24, 2008
So very sad and so well understood. Compelling poem SC.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Hang in there, Comfort. Anyone who can write this well
can't lose. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Sc sounds to me as though you are fighting with yourself, you are a strong person so I know yu will win. thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Sounds like a duel of personalities or inner souls wanting to break free, I hope the one you want is the victor in the long run. We all have our demons to battle and I wish you sterngth.
hugs
fee

Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Powerful write of determination; I will keep you in my prayers, SC!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Li'l Twister. :(

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
SC,
fine commentary on and (winning) response to an inner force, a demon to be challenegd and taken on...and beaten. And knowing you, you will win!
John


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