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Jennave Belleu Coz

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The Invitation
by Jennave Belleu Coz → (All Poetry by Jennave Belleu Coz)
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...At The Salton Sea
Slightly off course





...Came to me
While resting on the shore of
...Salton Sea


I saw the jug
Floating on the water
pretty blue glass
Rusty old cork

The note was written years before

I read the words
Though not to me
The message sure
From Salton Sea

An Invitation
To wade in deep
Then lay back and float
Love mine to keep
From an old note
And a body of water
The love was his
For someone's daughter

And I the thief
Reread the words
So filled with grief
Replaced the bottle
Then turned to leave

When next I saw
Rising from the water
Beauty that did drop my jaw


Rising as if from the sea
Wishing so He did love me

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 Reviews of "The Invitation"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Oh, Jen, this is magnificent! There's more to this poem than meets the eye. God's reminder that He loves us and will take care of us.

Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 6, 2007
Yes Jen, lovely verse.

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
STriking image created with the strokes of your pen on every line on this story/poem that captures the imagination of the romantics in all of us. Lovely Jen.
hugs
Fee


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