A Mermaid's Call (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 15, 2008

The sad fact is, Amber...there is so much truth contained within your well expressed lines!

Reviewed on September 24, 2007

I have enjoyed the reading of "A Mermaid's Call".

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 8, 2007

So many People change so much in a day, week, and a month and year!
WE need to FEEL the real genuiness in our friends and People around us!
Listen to YOUR instinct!
Wonderful poem on this subject!

Love and Warm Hugs, WArrior Lady SheCat Purrs...

STay SAFE and Positive!
Always! Be REAL we must all be!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on September 5, 2007

Homer said it and warned us of the sirens, we should keep wax handy.
...and some people are trying to convert "friend" in a loathed four letter word.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

sadly, there is much truth to this

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

A mystifying tale filled with compassion and deceit, just loved it.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

You express much truth via your verses, Amber. Sad perhaps but true nonetheless. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

Many a person has been fooled by the mermaid like lure. Many have fallen to the enchantment of their songs. They are always the masters of disguise with only one intent and purpose......to kill the heart.
A real friend is someone who will not let you walk out the front door with two differnt colored socks! This was a great read.
Thanks and best regards,
Chris

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

The lure of the mermaid siren is one as old as the ships that sail the seas. this poem is beautiful but a real reality check.

Fee

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

a nice write and well inspired. Lady J

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

Beauty is not always real.
The ability to discern that which is real is a difficult task.

A 'captivating' poem

Kathy

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

I love the subject of your poem and your handling of it. Your inspiration "sheep in wolf's clothing" paints a warning. We are all vulnerable and most have probably learned to listen with an underlying sensitivity--not to the spoken words, but to the motivation behind the words.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

I must confess Amber I have not read La Belle's blog today but I will.
Your poem is well written and yes some come to us in sheep's clothing pretending to be someone that they are not. Real friends are hard to find, but I must confess in all good concience that I have not always been the best of friend myself. I have failed, let people down even here at AD to my shame, but the important thing is that we stive to do your best and change things we find in ourselves that we do not like.Excellent poem! Blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

Amber they say no two people are alike and therefore we go through different lengths to get to know others and pray that each is acceptable for their ways. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on September 4, 2007

Amber, I liked the jest of this writing...no, I don't think a person ever really knows what goes on in another's mind...secrets many hold the key to may never be told to another. We just have to take each friendship a day at a time and hope we'll like the outcome. I liked this.