i know you feel my eyes watching you as i feel yours watching me
hopeless romantics, that’s what we’ve always been, you and i
with hearts too tender and hot passions far too tumultuous
if i could speak to you, face to face as eyes embrace
i would tell you to dream your romantic dreams
fantasize your encompassing erotic fantasies
feel your lover’s lips covering your own
with kisses that help you forget
the lies other lips have told
until you are breathless
with molten desire
so dream on
mi querida
dream
on
but
remember
as time goes by
no adoring dreams
and no fleeting fantasy
can hold you as arms of flesh
and no imaginary lips can kiss away
cold pain you carry inside your warm heart
so do not look for what you need in poetic words
they can never be a superior replacement for the lips
and the skillful, tender hands of your flesh and blood lover
dream your dreams of amor, hear distant whispers in your ears
but determine in your heart to find that one you cannot live without
and until you find him, let me be the fantasy who kisses away your tears
AN HONEST OFFERING TO A POOR, SEARCHING HEART THAT IS UNWISELY INCLINED TO ACCEPT... A 'TEMPORARY FIX'...UNTIL THE REAL THING COMES ALONG. WELL DONE, DON AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
DJ,
Always you send to me, a delightful energy that surges right where you want it to go. This feels so good to read this poem. I love the format and the intensity of your words.
Carried me to the point
and then expanded my visions
~Don Juan~
mesmerizing with what can be
Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2011
That's where I screwed up! lol Wonderfully written and so very true. It's nice to dream and fantasize but it doesn't beat a flesh and blood lover. Loved the format and this is a keeper! aloha from Hawaii, DJ!
The most tender words I have ever READ in my life and so true....your heart is singing... and I can hear it so very loud...sighhh ...and once again you have taken my breath completly away with this masterpiece sweet Juan....every line I can feel believe me deep very deep within this heart and soul....Hugss ... be safe and well OK
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! '...With kisses that help you forget the lies other lips have told'....'no imaginary lips can kiss away cold pain you carry inside your warm heart'.....'let me be the fantasy who kisses away you tears'-------MOST TALENTED, GOLDEN SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
"...with kisses that help you forget
the lies other lips have told.."
is just perfect, the quintessential
expression of romance and of love..
and that closing phrase is a clincher.
Gorgeous writing, DJ, gorgeous.
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Always you send to me, a delightful energy that surges right where you want it to go. This feels so good to read this poem. I love the format and the intensity of your words.
Nice!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
and then expanded my visions
~Don Juan~
mesmerizing with what can be
Lady Vivian
Love Always,
Chanti Lace
the lies other lips have told.."
is just perfect, the quintessential
expression of romance and of love..
and that closing phrase is a clincher.
Gorgeous writing, DJ, gorgeous.
John
Ron
This is a poetic treat, DJ.
Blessings,
Christine