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let fall the heaven gate
by William P Haynes → (All Poetry by William P Haynes)
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Think I'll find Napolean
wearin' Juliet's mask
Lookin' for Romeo
In a star studded cast

Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
Your eyes are tombstones, your lips are grim
Your lookin' for Jesus
But honey, I ain't him
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
It's time to be leavin' the table

Think I'll look for Helen
By followin' the moon
You know she's gone a-wanderin'
For four and nineteen years

Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
How cruel the fates that might have been
To play the game and never win
The judge might be holy but his laws are all sin
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
Her loves a vine just wrappin' round my heart
But if I tried to leave her it would tear me all apart
Let fall the heavens' gates, let fall
And I'll be your lover tonight
And I'll be your lover tonight


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 Reviews of "let fall the heaven gate"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
How cruel the fates that might have been

I hear ya! Boy do I hear ya!!!

Exceptional work..indeed I'd love to hear the lyrics blessed by an appropriate score..

Vesna :)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007
I love this beautiful shining treasure Will~
GREAt feelings emit graciously from this song!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 28, 2007
I enjoyed these lyrics. Your rhythm is strong enough that I almost heard it in my head, but I'm sure your music is different. Perhaps you'll add an mp3. :-)

Thank you, Bill for dropping by my story. It's always good to see a comment from you.
Nordette

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Very well done! So light and upbeat, enjoyed this much.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Interesting song!!

Love Tinka


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