if by chance summer's colors forget you
like the lost love of your life,
scattered heart petals let loose,
one at a time,
and you find your way back up
the garden path of love unconditional,
take heed of fair weather's warnings
rose refuse trampled on and left to curl and crunch,
yet what's to be expected
from this weakened nature, this fool's charade,
little puppet you danced, wound up and bound,
dangling from the strings pulled with true skill,
and your tears gathered there on a branch's edge
dance, little puppet, dance,
among the far-flung fields,
green with the envy of the forgotten,
yet afire with the blooming of rainbows,
big and small, love's spirits joined hands,
wearing leafy crowns of this drifting reverie
and there,
love's foolish puppet,
you remained,
discussing the wind's fiery brush of fresh air,
blowing back the fall of the grey clouds
once more-
once more,
we ride bareback those very clouds,
once more,
we bow blushing for the poppy's red kiss,
tangled up two by two in the anchoring weeds,
we loves now tossed away and wavering,
on the tips of autumn's brittle grass
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I particularly like
"green with the envy of the forgotten,
yet afire with the blooming of rainbows"
and
"once more,
we ride bareback those very clouds".
Axilea
Anna
EDWIN
At your very best here, this is impressive writing, rich and beautiful.
John
Be always safe,
Karen
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
"and there,
love's foolish puppet,
you remained,
discussing the wind's fiery brush of fresh air,
blowing back the fall of the grey clouds
once more -
once more,
we rode bareback those very clouds ...."
Indeed. StormSpinner written all over these lines!!! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. =]
fee
your collection of words trickle down the page very nicely.