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Final Closing Night
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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Perhaps tomorrow or maybe the next
she'll think to recall that closing night
when the swift coup de grace of the sword
missed its fatal intention
severing instead the tenuous cords
holding back the rose-colored curtains
that framed the stage on which they played

Folds upon folds...layer upon ethereal layer
floating downward engulfing and protecting
wounds too raw to bleed

Rose-colored curtains forever stealing
his triumphant bow of victory
on that ill fated closing night 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Final Closing Night"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 8, 2011
Well Penned and profound


William

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on January 7, 2011
Wow this was a very strong writing. Interesting ending too.


Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on January 7, 2011
This seems quite powerful, possibly deeper even, than my perceptive abilities. Still, it's one that I'll come back to, nicely done Pat.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 7, 2011
Beautiful phrasing here, Pat! Intense story....

Anna

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2011
Pat, Descriptive and powerful.
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
Sustained and powerful metaphor, Pat, the whole work thought through and with real impact.

John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
Strong emotions well put...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
An awesome piece of writing...well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
Powerfully effective in metaphorical and symbolic expression, Pat. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
That's tellin' him! Time to heal. Patrick

Reviewed by andrea Overla
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
cool.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 6, 2011
Wow, this is so powerful! Vivid and intriguing Pat!
Blessings,
Christine


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