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All Wrapped Up
by Rebecca Lerwill → (All Poetry by Rebecca Lerwill)
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a cold winter morning in the Colorado Rockies triggered these thoughts...


never before…
have I felt this way
never before…
have I been in such disarray


Your amazing touch
triggers sensation
I cannot explain.
Your amazing touch
softly caressing
hot desires run through my veins.



My nakedness unveiled
and you cover me,
my carelessness revealed
and you smother me



we don’t need a reason
to hold on tight
don’t care about the season
for us time’s always right



velvet is what comes to mind
wrapped in your softness I go blind
I’m touching you with growing pleasure
a thousand kisses could not feel better
you’re here for me in every weather
I love you, my most cherished….


                                                    


                                                    … sweater.


 


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 Reviews of "All Wrapped Up"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
LOL! That's a good one! You had me, though, with that line -- "a thousand kisses could not feel better." I was just watching the movie "Open Range" and at the end, when Postlewaite gets together with Sue, he tells her when she kisses him "I'm going to need about a thousand of those!" Hahahah. Good stuff, Becca.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
I love this! Wonderful!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
You bugger, you had me 100% fooled... LOLOLOL
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Ah....you had to the very end!!!! Loved it, very cleverly and well written...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Bummer...got to love it!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Quite an ending! And I often feel the very same way, about my longjohns!!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
cool and clever finish!! love it!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Love it bunches..
Ron
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
You tease!;-) hahaha, this really fooled me,
very cleverly done Becca!

Ciao!
ET
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Yeah, hot number and you had to go and kill it . . .
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Clever ending to this...but...
I have to say Becca, without that final word this would make one hell of a love poem all on it's own. It is beautiful and passionate and to be honest too tenderly romantic to be turned into a riddle poem...no matter how much I grinned at the end...I was enthralled with the passion of it all the way through...

Fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Fun write, Rebecca; well penned! You got me too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D LOL
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
LOL, ya got me!!!!!!!!! I'm sitting here, wrapped in my nice warm throw blanket. :) Love this one, saving it: well done, Rebecca.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
haha you had me there
Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
I truly appreciate your offering of expression!
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