I was just thinking about death the other day and came up with this rather simple poem
of course one day the game will be over
I will die like a silent nun or a sage
With people surrounding me and mourning
my loss and I will still listen to them
with my other sense
and smile contentedly on what I did to change the world
but then of course, I might as well
die like a nobody in a strange land
simply poisoned by a forest snake and the tribes
will host an open funeral not knowing who I am
or what I was doing in the deep woods.
I can also dissociate while I die
A free fall from the sky while flying or
on a parachute or a plane crash
Or maybe simply I’ll prefer to sail away
on a full moon night and find myself alone
in the middle of the seas, when suddenly my boat
will capsize to drown or wash me away
and I’ll never be found again, like a true poet
or I might just get killed by a fundamentalist
if I write something too radical, and my
arms and chest will bleed and people
will swarm around me and carry me along
like a dead queen on a funeral procession
or I can simply die alone inside a cottage
by the sea, in a dark deep island
where people will discover that I existed
before ants and rats made a feast of me and my books
I might die from a plain and boring illness
And my children and grandchildren
will kiss me profusely until my last breath
or I might simply die young and beautiful
and my man will hold me in his arms
kiss me one last time and
promise me endlessly that in love and in death
we are finally one.
One thing is for sure, no matter how I die, it’ll be
something of an adventure.
This is something many of us mortals have pondered since the beginning of time...is it not? I shall prefer to slip away into the silence and do the opposite of Dylan Thomas's "Do not go gentle into that good night"
Well done, Saberi.
Love
Amor
In scripture it speaks of a group of people in Christ Jesus, at some point in the historical timeline, that will not experience physical death. They will be translated into the presence of the Most High God and will rule and reign with Him for all eternity.
No matter what, most humans will lose their spirit at some point. Your ponderings poetess, however melancholy, still throb with an adventurous spirit. I like that!
Blessings ...
One thing 's for sure you'll be remembered long after with poems such as this. Being older and probably closer to it I really don't care how I go as long as the suffering is short and the pain minimal. Peace, Love and Blessings My Friend Always, Paul.
...in giving many reason to think...you have penned in many scenarios...one thing for certain...and that is what living can bring to mind...adventure.
excellent Saberi...
John
Saberi,
I have often wondered how I would die, when and where. Sometimes its best not too know. I do know where I'm going and its a beautiful place called Heaven! Thought reflectiing poetry, Saberi. Excellent!
Doesn't hurt to ponder ones final demise and how it may happen. I fact it may help keep you on the right track while alive. Heart attacks and cancer are the two most likely to kill someone.
Well done, Saberi.
Love
Amor
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
No matter what, most humans will lose their spirit at some point. Your ponderings poetess, however melancholy, still throb with an adventurous spirit. I like that!
Blessings ...
One thing 's for sure you'll be remembered long after with poems such as this. Being older and probably closer to it I really don't care how I go as long as the suffering is short and the pain minimal. Peace, Love and Blessings My Friend Always, Paul.
excellent Saberi...
John
I have often wondered how I would die, when and where. Sometimes its best not too know. I do know where I'm going and its a beautiful place called Heaven! Thought reflectiing poetry, Saberi. Excellent!
Blessings to you,
~Linda
Regis