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ANTICIPATION
by Kathy Armijo → (All Poetry by Kathy Armijo)
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Anticipation

© By Kathy Armijo

 

The evening began with clouds looming on the horizon

Our picnic dinner was a culinary family collaboration

An expectation of breath-taking fireworks filled the air

 

Conversation was light-hearted

Suddenly, the wind began to swirl

It was reminiscent of the opening of the Wizard of Oz

 

Lightening began to crackle

Counting seconds between lightening and thunder

We judged it about three miles away

 

Not a problem, we knew the wind would

Drive the rain in a direction away from us

After all, the reason for the celebration … fireworks

 

Suddenly, the wind speed around us increased

An occasional drop of rain was felt

Quickly, it was torrential

 

Within forty-five minutes the earth

Became six inches of clay

Weather forecast was 1 ½” of rain per hour

 

Would the rain cease in time for the fireworks

The crowd began to thin

Yet, the pyrotechnic crew never doubted the show’s fate

 

The scheduled time for the show to begin came and went

Minutes ticked by

The rain softened to a light sprinkle

 

A test shell was fired

With green and red filling the sky

Followed by an incredible lightening display – competition, we joked

 

Then, gloriously, fireworks began to fill the night’s sky

Spectator car horns joined in the celebration

The show ended with a rousing finale, joined by cars honking

 

The rain recovered from its brief respite

Quickly beginning to fall with renewed vigor

Followed by exuberating feelings and ….

 

How do we get out of nature’s mud bog???

 

 


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 Reviews of "ANTICIPATION"
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Awesome I'm glad you got to enjoy the fireworks
Excellent visuals and flow
welcome back!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
The days have been many since a new poem from your pen graced the den. It is so very comforting to know you're still out there and think enough of your friends here at the den to share a new poem. It sounds like your July Fourth celebration was very good, even though challenged by Mother Nature's pyrotechnics. And I did not believe a little mud could possibly stop or deter you. God Bless. JMW

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Long time no see sis! welcome back, and thaks for the guffaw thinking about tou bogged out in a few inches of mud, that was worth of a few fireworks itself! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Delightful indeed! put a smile on my face

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Cool experience!
Good to see you again, Kathy...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Hello! wow,, sounds like a night to remember,,,makes the fireworks all the more special!
Love, Christine

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
You put us right there with you Kathy. You've been missed.

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Glad you got to see the fireworks anyway; you got a double blessing with God's fireworks! Hope you are okay; you've been missed here, Kathy! Welcome back!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Kathy, so nice to have you back, I have missed your writing and this was a glorified beauty indeed....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Well it seems the pyrotechnic Gods favored you enough to control the weather long enough to allow their greatest show to be broadcast...after that who cares about a little mud. Well done Kathy.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
a wonderful time and a very nice expression--clever last line!

Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Kathy,

Oh, I've missed you - are you and your hubby okay??

I love this write - the 4th of July, fireworks in general are my favorites - and when the Creator adds His to the mix, well, now, who can top that? LOL

Read "The Shortest Fireworks Show in History" to read my experience with lightning and fireworks. :)

Still and all, glad the display went off without a hitch. You took me there, and for that, I am grateful - well done.

Fireworks on both our minds - my poem today was about Celebration Freedom, in Crowley, Texas! And yes, they had boom booms! LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Glad you got to see the fireworks. We saw them too in a slight rain. They used to cancel if raining, fireworks must be more durable than in the past. I did enjoy the 4th of July and am enjoying Summertime tremendously. I love the hot humid weather and cannot believe how fast time is going. Glad you are back writing.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Kathy, great Fourth of July story, nice to read you again, have missed you much.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
..great story you have given us Kathy...and happy that you you got to view the fireworks after all.
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
I never made to the Firewrks here but we did get to see them from our deck. Glad the rain held back for youor you would have had to be like Ronald and watch them from the car. Great write and welcomed back Kathy it seems it has been so long since we've heard from you .

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Kathy, I've missed your writing. This was great. I stayed home while my family went to a public fireworks display. They are pretty but I hate to fight the crowd. Besides my neighbors had plenty of fireworks --- which I picked up from my yard the next day.

Larry

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
I remember having to watch fireworks from the car because it rained that night on my uncle's farm.

Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Quite the story Kathy. Very well done my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
This sounds like a miracle story. God sent the rain to clear the air, then the fireworks lit up a crisp clear sky. What a lovely celebration after the rain. Nice write. (By the way, welome back. Haven't seen you in a while.)

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
LOL--Yes, that was last night, for sure. Wonderful how the rain stopped long enough for us to have our show, in addition to the lightning show.
We are so lucky to think that last night was just a 'normal' night to us.
And I am so thankful for extended family.
Love ya--RaeLynn

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Sounds like a Hitchcock thriller but at least you got to see the darling fire-works display. Good to see you back Kathy.


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