You Will Miss Me (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 20, 2008

I have lived this recently, with a once dear friend...

I can only hope that someday... somehow... she understands the loss.

Thank you...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

So sad and moving..but noble too, I loved that touch. Memorable. Love, Diana.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Powerfully stated for sure. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Your words emote strongly - I can feel the air in and around your words. I love "delicate heart" - the highly sensitive among us can surely relate to all these two words, paired together, mean.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Outstanding composition... "You Will Miss Me"... I like the satire on the closing lines.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

'Here is my heart, take it with you'---- Beautiful, I love this!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

Most beautiful Write
Enjoyed
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

I like this poem, Bernice. It's strong and good. I think the last part is the strongest. However, that's an interesting shape for this poem-- almost a cross. Is that intentional? I tried to read it with a Christian conotation, but I didn't get it at all, untill I read it without that context.

I like your style. --Charlie

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

Such Heart! Beautiful! Thank you. Carin'

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

Oh how the heart aches when such treachery is delivered to to soul, beautifully written....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

Bernice,
Oh!! This Is So Beautiful With The Heart of Selflessness for the Selfish Person Who Needs a Heart

Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

Bernice,

As J. Earl said, hindsight is 20/20 and for those who hurt us, they may not realize they're doing so until they look back and reflect and even then, it is not a guarantee. The only thing we can assure ourselves of doing is moving past the hurt and moving on with our lives.

I enjoyed your poem, but especially the last two lines. So much truth rests within them, specifically.

Nice work,
Jill

Reviewed by J. Evans

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

We never know what we have, untill it's gone...beautiful job

J. Earl Evans

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

...this is a wonderful write Bernice...I can see the nervous up and down...restless left foot...perhaps to sprint...and so he did. Someday that left foot will know your shoes...perhaps he will recognize the soul...your heart.
very well written...
John