I've been watching
all the things they said
would come to pass
confusion, deceit
lies, murder
pollution, hate
rape, incest
earthquakes, terror
I see them in you too
you go around in a daze
a black fog
like a crown of thorns
around your head
aching, bleeding
looking and not seeing
hearing and not believing
can you hear my heart breaking
do you see my tears
I weep for you
because you won't hear me
calling
come with me
come to Jesus
let's go home
where we'll lounge underneath
the blazing sun without fear
of cancer ...
heaven will still be
as beautiful without you
but as I have loved you
here on earth
I want to love you still
in heaven...
...you beautifully give words of poetry...the wanting feeling of home... a neighborhood of eternity...where the tan of your lines...golden...calling one...invites everyone.
excellent feelings from your heart Bernice...
John
I always loved that verse... I would have taken you under my wings like a hen would her chicks, and yet you would not... so anguished. Your poem brings out the same feelings. Good stuff. --Charlie
You have my spirit stirring with this splendid poem Bernice!My ears are open and I hear you loud and clear! We all need to keepeyes and ears open in the present condition our world is in,and you have done so beautifully! Thank you for sharing!
Beautiful expression of what we desire the most for those who we love the most - the experience and refuge of an eternal heaven! Love the flow to this, Bernice. Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2008
Yup a heart like me. lol...Indeed you will...... And in the potting shed in half hour...
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Cryssa
excellent feelings from your heart Bernice...
John
It can be a long arduous journey but one well worth making. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Georg
Love,
ET
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.