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Serendipity (My first haiku)
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(My very first official Haiku, did I do well?Charlie? 5-7-5 right?)
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You came to me like
the whisper of autumn and
like its leaves I fell

 

Copyright © 2008 by Bernice Angoh

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Serendipity (My first haiku)"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
Absolutely gorgeous! I'd say that you did VERY well. And I've always liked that word, serendipity!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 29, 2008

I never did get the knack of Haikuing. This is wonderful. --Charlie

Reviewed on April 29, 2008
AURGH!!
Thats FANTASTIC Bernice!!!
and Clever how the leaves fell & you!!
Very Well Done!!
Embraced ~ Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Very sweet and lovely....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 29, 2008
great job poetess, I love writing these but haven't did any lately

Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Brava, Bernice! A beautiful and thoughtful 'Ku; no changes, please :o)
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
A very beautiful and animated haiku... Lavendar Jazz

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
This is very beautiful.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
BEAUTIFUL!!! I absolutely love the imagery you create with this and also the soft meaning.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
Gorgeous Ku by a lovely lady...one of the best first time I've seen.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 29, 2008
I saw the film of the same name, and your haiku took me back there.
Your haiku is perfect.

Georg


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