Money Comes and Goes (My third Haiku) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

wow
& WOW
& wow....this is so cool!!!
I may have to try it again
you are goood!!!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

So very true! Excellent, Bernice!

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

A very rich man will tell you that money doesn't buy happiness from the deck of his luxury yacht...
The poor man will tell you that he doesn't undertand the rich man.

Georg

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Last line is killer-cleaver. --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Advice well taken and oh so true....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

haikuism got you my dear,

Love is like money
it truly do feel real good
the termites eat wood

sorry I couldn't resist, yours got me started, super

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Another excellant ku with a great moral and realistic message. Lovely Bernice and good advice as well.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

So much power in these words, Bernice - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Much is sage in these few words

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Great write and great thought. Liz

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

I agree. Wealth is not money! Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

You can change your states of thoughts by changing your mind....

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Fabulously done...again!
Keep this up and you may just have to write a whole book of haikus.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

nice hairdo! bet it took some work. :) kinda like our minds, as in your haiku. :)

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Well done Bernice. A wise man (my father) more than once said, "You are what you think." You've captured that philosopy perfectly. Haiku is difficult for most but you shine with this one my friend.
Marcia

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Oh so true, and almost daily i have to remind myself to cleanse my mind and fill it with all the gratitude of all the blessings i have.
wonderful Bernice,

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

This is priceless! wonderful haiku ...