Stop.Pause.Rewind.Play (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 5, 2008

I like the way it plays out in our everyday lives. It eliminates the Ideal and fantasies of life and deals with reality. Love it.

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 29, 2008

A very positive and inspirational poem! I love it, Bernice! We think so alike on this matter :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on August 23, 2008

Kudos... well written and full of wise advice.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on August 22, 2008

Great wisdom and inventive writing.

Axilea

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on August 16, 2008

Brilliant advice. You need a column. --Charlie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 13, 2008

excellent write write Bernice
I wish I had a remote ....lol
Peace & love

William

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on August 4, 2008

damn good title: a genius at work in this poem! Colored words were smart

And I had to paste your quote at top into my notebook!

Have a great August(OceanOverture)It's a water month for me-Pisces!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 2, 2008

This poem should be read to young people, so they can be encouraged to never quit..Very wonderful poem, I really enjoyed this one.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 1, 2008

Bernice,

Excellent, thought provoking lines - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 1, 2008

Hello bernice,
Ahh This Is Excellent & Indeed quiting is the failure, not in puruits of achievements & wants & goals.
Choices Matter, even a mistake is a lesson learned towards success
Much Love & Happiness To You Always
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 1, 2008

Bernice, I love this...I agree with you wholeheartedly.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

This is much more than clever, Bernice, it's sound and wise and well delivered.
John

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Very inspiring verse my dear friend, if you read my poem, "tricky azz poet," you may want to kick me to the dogs, I'll understand, it's just hard for me to be a phony, I had to come clean, what I did was kind of mean, hugs

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

I love it and will keep this in mind daily. Thank you for sharing Bernice, words of wisdom.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by J. Evans

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

A true definition of life.
J.Earl Evans

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Oh my,I love this..excellent writing sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe evening...Hugss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Hmmmm, very inventive and one must take "pause" to fully understand, great write...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

WOW! I needed this just now. God gave me the gift of your words and your wisdom Lady. Thanks,

ann

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Bernice, this is pure wisdom! I love your tape and play it all the time;-)You are a joy to read!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Bernice, you will encounter that a few people instead of using the Rewind, choose to take the tape out and throw it away, because their lives aren't worth to be seen twice.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

One of your best writes that I've read to date Bernice. Great message expertly crafted.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Hi Bernice,this is a nice comparison between life and playing a video game.Your poem is fill with wisedom,knowledge and advice.I enjoy reading it.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Ahh Bernice for such a young person you are very wise, I love your sense of optimism, hope and faith...be all that you can be is a military slogan but I think it applies nicely to sum you up.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Great words of wisdom.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Excellent write, Bernice. The diction just right. -gene.

Reviewed by Debra Kraft

Reviewed on July 31, 2008

Oh, I like this! Well done! And good advice, too! ;-)