Resentment (senryu) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 21, 2008

Don't let them out. Or just let them go. I don't know. But your words struck a cord of recognition here. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on November 21, 2008

been there.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2008

Sad to think what's really behind many a smile...excellent, Holly

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

The facade of a smile...excellent and powerful write, bernice!

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

great write, resentment held in turns wild. Better to tell them off right at the time. LOL

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

That smile hiding the resentment within ....

nice work Bernice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Bernice,
Great power in these well-chosen, pithy words.
John

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Amazing and yes powerful. If we could only remember when we do this to turn our inside to mirror that smile.

love ya,
ann

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Ah, what then lurks behind the smile of one so deep.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

You pack a punch in those few words. OUCH! May I never harbor such feelings again! --Charlie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

An excellent piece Bernise
so much said in a few words
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Wonderful writing sweet lady...have a great and safe night...Hugss

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Bernice this is not only a brilliant Senyru it is such a deep, intense statement that applies to so many of us. Especially we poets, most of us are a smiling hopeful personalities but when we let our pens have their freedoms...our monsters are often unleashed. Well done,
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

I've seen that smile somewhere before...hee, hee...
This could also be a senryu about passive aggressivenes...:~)

Cryssa

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

A smile can be nice
Can take you to paradise
On the way to hell

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

This one is haunting ... and very well penned, Bernice; well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 20, 2008

Yes! WOW! Bernice, probably one of the most philosophical statement that I have had the pleasure of read and review. Yes! WOW!

Georg