Obsession (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

lol. On the cusp of Pisces and Aries, I'll just stand around and watch and take action where need be. lol. Boy am I full of it today. A nice blend of fire from water. Liz

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 14, 2009

As a Piscis I will make my Nikes start running! ! !

Georg

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 14, 2009

Dark Onyx Visions Capture an Ellegance of Mystery Inside the Lines of "Obsession"....
Love The Pic! Love The Poem Too!!
Have a Great Time on Your Vacation!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced With Love Vickie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 14, 2009

In few words, you've spoken volumes! Well done, Bernice!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Very powerful and intriguing...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Bernice,
As Karen says this has a chilling eerie feel to it, and as one who is on the cusp of Libra and Scorpio I feel a little shake and rattle inside. Thank you for this.
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Has a chilling, eerie feel to it, wow....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

With that long central line, I get the emphasis on "possession", which is kinda snakey and all-consuming. the "sss"s are kinda hypnotic, like the eyes, perhaps. Other than that, Bernice, I have to confess to being a little out of the loop with the astrological inferences? I admire your intensity and compactness. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Love it Bernice and love that graphic, instead of feeling scared though get a sense of impishness.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Anze Mofor

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Seriously, and keep running...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Love those eyes, Bernice, but I run in as few words as possible.
-gene.

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

for sure-- run! --Charlie