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on top
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when i see you happy
it does something to me
some internal gush
like a warm blood rush
girly and tickly, you see
 


your beautiful confidence
composure and style
delicately traverses
my earthly terrain
inducing a spontaneous shiver
 


how hypnotic under your gaze
something sacred and undesecrated
that draws upon this warmth
and seems to breathe of please don’t stop
you know its ok, i like you on top
 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "on top"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on April 25, 2004
this is hot.....

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2004
Wow, I knew I would like this.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 24, 2004
Excellent poem Debby!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 23, 2004
Great one Debby, love these lines;-)

"how hypnotic under your gaze
something sacred and undesecrated"

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2004
Ditto...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 23, 2004
bo better pleace to be ;)

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on April 23, 2004
On top? Hmmm. I'm confused. Seems like there's more going on here than I thought at first glance.


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