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observing artifacts
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the universe will conspire to
give you clues and make awareness
known to you
 


its use and perception and
identification falls upon
the observer
 


an invitation came to spend
the day with friends
 


they took me to the tar pits
an ancient site of primal goo
here the earth oozes sticky substance
and the archeological digs
reveal bones of animals from
a million years ago
 


big sabor tooth cats, wolves, and bears
oversized sloths and long tusked mammoths
 


a time of carnivores each hunting the other
predators seeking their own survival
yet here they were locked in time
fallen into the pits where their bones were discovered
 


down the street was the art museum
and king tut’s era was on display
as we waited patiently to enter
I walked upon a mosaic path
in that moment I sensed a flash
I know I’d seen that mosaic
in a dream somewhere in the past
 


I eyed the artifacts and the intricate detail
amazing the artistry 4000 years old
and even back then politics and religion
would cause a king to ruin
 


everything laid within that tomb
intentionally designed for the afterlife
weapons and boats, servants, and tools
makes you wonder if they were ever used
 


the ceremony, the care, and the effort
inlaid, engraved, and gilded
hieroglyphs depicting stories and philosophy
I was wishing I could interpret 
 


strangely enough some of the symbols
were very similar to the rock art
I’d seen in the deserts of America
left by other ancients
 


 


 


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 Reviews of "observing artifacts"
Reviewed on July 28, 2005
More Inspiration intrigued Debb and Us too, for reading your wonderful informative Poem once again~! This was intense- what a great day you had- another wonderful Memory/Blessing. WArmly-Lady,Sheee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
yep, the symbolic nature of man's inner consciousness is universal ... informative, inspired and eloquently penned ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Another fine write!!

And hey ....thanks for helping me on the grammar thingy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Descriptive write at its very best...just superb...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Dear Debby,

A wonderfully descriptive write. There are so many fascinating archeological finds... and how many more yet to be found!

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed on July 15, 2005
An excellent write here Debby
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2005
Don't know all that much about the mythical aspect of your work, but I love the way you said it. Good.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 14, 2005
i used to love the LaBrea tar pits...is that where you were? i'm sure there are many of them. great poem

Reviewed on July 14, 2005
wonderful write, debby! well done! :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 14, 2005
Ditto Ed's comments, Debby. Nicely done indeed. Thank you for the education and the thought-provoking verses. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 14, 2005
Fascinating and very true, Debby - and I for one believe that there is still very much to be learned by modern man about the very intriguing and mystifying links between many of North America's 'Ancient Ones,' including the Anasazi, the Aztecs, the Incas, and the Mayans with those ancient Egyptians.


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