defines (poem) by Debby Rosenberg on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

The form of this poem lends freedom and air to your words...helping the reader to see beyond the confines of ordinary labels. The words are so true...thought-provoking write!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on March 16, 2008

I like the setup of this write. What does define us..? Many many things me thinks......M

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

I like this, it really makes you stop and ponder the statements it makes. The picture is wonderful, too.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

Ab-so-lutely. 100% agree... but identity is STILL a big issue which we struggle to get to grips with... like shifting sand. All the things you name in this poem are like the hooks on our person to which we attach and attribute importance and descriptors for our sense of being. We know in our hearts, I think, that the who and what we are is much more elusive than that; we can only recognise it when it is somehow reflected in something/someone else... and then we know love... for self and others. Inspirational, Debby, thanks. Kate xx

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

Yes, the tent that our spirit dwells in is riddled with anomalies. Superb ponderations, almost Zen-like in nature.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

First the words, after...the video, like the words more, they come out stronger.
Your quill are an inspirated one.

Georg

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

So we are left with the Spiritual....This is a mind expanding piece, that leaves me with a feeling of great freedom, relief and spiritual expansiveness..an almost scary feeling of our own power beyond the physical.
Loved the video too. So impressive as a whole concept..Love, Diana.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

...defines...is beyond definition...an open door...and your poetry and video...light in darkness. Here the pupil finds a rainbow of learning...in another's eyes...his own.
excellent Debby...
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

Excellant!
Fee

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

We should realize that every moment there is, is you, is us, is all,
very nice video to highlight your poem, enjoyed it much, very enriching! Bless You! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

We seem to have similar thoughts lately!;-) Debby I love the video, it is fantastic,and brings home the message even more powerfully!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

You are who you choose to be, what you choose to strive for and let no one stand in your way....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2008

True words resonating despite the human inclination to conquer through labels......