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tree of Knowledge
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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Eve reached out her hand
she could almost touch it
shiney, tempting, juicy

Knowledge, understanding, answers
she could hardly contain
her excitement

'Adam', come see
"taste this with me'
'I'm feeling'....'desire!'

'Desire?', Adam raised an eyebrow
'Desire?' piqued an arousal
from his relaxation, posed

He stood, erect and held her hand

'But, Evie...baby'
'how about, this time, this world...'
'We stay in the garden, and
dance instead?'

 

 

*image credits:

top - title "New Earth" artist unknown

bottom - title "The Journey" artist/author Lawrence Spencer


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 Reviews of "tree of Knowledge"
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Debby,

Who knows what they were really thinking. Excellent.

Mary

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Sometimes I wonder just how much we really know...A great thought provoker, Deb!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 23, 2012
Appetites existed way before they knew how to be satisfied, Debby! Or were they satisfied until a new desire emerged? The potential was there whatever. Mind you, I think dancing is the answer to everything, both before and after; starters and dessert! Mouthwatering write, Debby! :)) xx

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 23, 2012
A harboring take on the first couple in that marvelous laboratory where the Most High created them. peace to you ... richard

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 20, 2012
Love the picture and "Desire" takes on an exciting meaning.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 20, 2012
Must have been some dance holding her hand erect ;)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 20, 2012
. . . and not know the release of that desire, Debby?


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