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deep
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oh you, yes you, you, you,
who is my need and want
filling my soul with the very fire
that keeps your sound aloft
i can not wait one minute more or
day or week to hear you say you love me
and feel your strength of arms and back and rippled thighs
a power surge of lion/lioness that mates upon the night
haunting me and calling me now to yield
for you are the one, the only one that always knows and allows me bring and wrap around you warm

oh you, yes you we are we will
to mate with wings in tangled sheets
and burst into one hundred constellations
as you access this deep
oh god, oh baby its what you do
that brings me whimper
when you're not here to firm impale
me with the spear of mushroom
sliding into my ecstatic warm i die another death
hold me now
i'll kiss you hard so i will remember
how i love you

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 Reviews of "deep"
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
An outstanding poem ..fantastic images.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
Love your poetry keep writing

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2003
*SIGH* Absolutely beautiful.. the emotion overpowering.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Debbie,
Powerful expression and imagery in this one!
"burst into one hundred constellations"

Hugs,
Maria


Reviewed by Jason Wise
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
"sliding into my ecstatic warm i die another death
hold me now
i'll kiss you hard so i will remember
how i love you"

Loved your poetry, keep writing.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
this was intriguing and very hot great job on this

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Yikes!! I feel some hot emotions in this piece, Debby!! :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
"spear of mushroom sliding... "... what an image...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
whoa...she's tangled up in the sheets of cosmic lions...great write Debby, love the word play!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
I agree with Peggy... the picture you painted was perfect

Reviewed on March 6, 2003
This is so beautiful! Just love these lines:

i can not wait one minute more or
day or week to hear you say you love me

Such a wonderful poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2003
Debby
this is so excellent
"oh you, yes you we are we will
to mate with wings in tangled sheets
and burst into one hundred constellations
as you access this deep "
Peg


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