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to be leisured
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
  
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ah to be leisured,
where we could allow the world
to drift away
leaving the place of must, and should,
and have to
enjoying the peace of love to,
like to, and want to

no demands, no pressure
no whip to perform
just take it easy
to come as it comes

yet understanding the inner urge
often unable to hold it back
it gushes forth in river rapids
desire to be and see results
anxious and spoiled
so wanting of now

is a woman's desires
so different from man's
a build of needing
that comes from within
baby drop your pants
I'll do you now
right here on the floor
urgent in its passion
and so satisfying

and yet a man seems so
eager to please
touching and kissing
enjoying the tease
to bring on her waves
in momentum repeat
now you tell me baby
who holds the control?



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 Reviews of "to be leisured"
Reviewed on October 7, 2003
moving sexy piece Deb, you went there with this. enjoyed the ride. hugs G

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Hot one, but expressing so much wisdom and emotion.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Cold shower time, Debs. This was heart thumpingly sensual.
Bobbi

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
who's ever on top...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
Woman has always had that control...but when it comes to love, then it is a mutual gift that is incomparable. Beautifully done, Debby.
Amor

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
Oh yea, you got that right, way to go Debby;-)!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
Great write!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
So well written piece..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
Emotions excellently expressed Debby!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
well written. you did a great job on this

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 3, 2003
Excellent emotions expressed so well in your verses.


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